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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Swift_ninja( on 2005-05-26 at 00:16:27

Please rate my waterfall 1-10. And if there's anything wrong please tell me how I can fix it.

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The updated version had a blockiness thing which i missed so heres an updated updated one

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Report, edit, etc...Posted by FTR_ROCKO on 2005-05-26 at 00:31:49

6/10

Report, edit, etc...Posted by O)FaRTy1billion on 2005-05-26 at 00:49:47

Wow, at least give a reason...

I like how it has the cave at the bottom with the guy able to move about a bit. I think it is cool waterfall

8.5/10
Maybe you could try and find a way to use a bit less sprites? Owell, its still cool.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by wesmic da pimp on 2005-05-26 at 00:54:12

very nice job, i like the tunnel...

8.42867243/10

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Ultimo on 2005-05-26 at 01:28:27

Not bad, not bad at all. Way better then the classic generic waterfall, the cave gives off a good feel to the enviroment.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Tuxedo Templar on 2005-05-26 at 02:11:07

Except for the sprite use, I'd give this a 9/10 as far as waterfalls go.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Voyager7456(MM) on 2005-05-26 at 07:41:17

Yeah, the sprite use is a little too heavy. If theres any of those trees on the side that aren't being used to cover up blockyness, take them away.

The little cave is really nice, so I'll give it a 8.5/10

Report, edit, etc...Posted by glytchur on 2005-05-26 at 10:17:01

8/10 even though there are alot of sprites, try taking some sprites off...

Report, edit, etc...Posted by FTR_ROCKO on 2005-05-26 at 11:32:58

QUOTE

Wow, at least give a reason...

Reason(s):
Nice cave, but is there a way out? (poor little civ...)
Sprite-intense
Some blockiness was missed
Nothing new...

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Jordan on 2005-05-26 at 11:52:26

wow nice better then wut i can do,
7/10

Report, edit, etc...Posted by haschischtasche on 2005-05-26 at 13:13:37

i think it's good
8.7/10

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Swift_ninja( on 2005-05-26 at 17:38:49

I only put a lot of sprites cause I dont got any other editor then starforge that can support sprites and make good regular terrain. This is my first waterfall and I plan on using it on a map with a LOT less sprites. Ill make another one with less sprites and post it.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by warhammer40000 on 2005-05-26 at 17:42:10

The cave idea r0x0rz your s0x0rz! bleh about the sprites, the entire idea is great. I like the cave, plants, splashing, it's nawice. Good job.

8.666

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Puni(F) on 2005-05-26 at 18:04:46

Bye Bye kitty

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Swift_ninja( on 2005-05-26 at 18:10:07

ok im going to add and updated version of the waterfall onto the first post.. and

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Bye Bye kitty

Report, edit, etc...Posted by KaboomHahahein on 2005-05-26 at 18:11:08

I was expecting just another waterfall but this was a pretty good one because of the nice cave/hole going through the waterfall.

8/10

Report, edit, etc...Posted by scwizard on 2005-05-26 at 18:13:11

Sprite use way way to heavy, blockiness, and finally think of the kittens.
5/10 but I probably shouldn't be talking because I couldn't do much better.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Ultimo on 2005-05-26 at 18:33:51

The kittens thing is old. Get over it.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by ShadowBrood on 2005-05-26 at 18:48:10

Top of the waterfall sucks. The rest of it is cool and creative. Keep it up but make different terrain, like a city for example!

8/10

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Kingra on 2005-05-26 at 19:01:31

I'd have to agree with ShadowBrood.

If there were a possible way to have a small open area between the bridge and the water under it, it would look more realistic. But for now...
The part where the water and bridge meets looks very blocky. If possible use sprites to cover it up.

7.5/10

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Swift_ninja( on 2005-05-26 at 22:24:56

I didnt see that terrain on the bridge, so I updated it again..

Report, edit, etc...Posted by RexyRex on 2005-05-27 at 00:00:04

Excellent. It looks great, especially the reflection in the water.
9/10.

Just cut down on some sprites and it's perfect.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by TheDaddy0420 on 2005-05-27 at 01:16:12

a nice new twist to the over done water fall, good job!

Report, edit, etc...Posted by NerdyTerdy on 2005-05-27 at 01:23:59

well I noticed a lot of areas that should have been more payed attention to so that they blended, but the cave idea is new sort you get credit for that, but think about it realistically, in real life wouldn't the water be pouring over it? you could try using a pylon aura to illustrate that, but it's new so I guess 7/10.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Swift_ninja( on 2005-05-27 at 12:38:42

QUOTE(NerdyTerdy @ May 27 2005, 12:23 AM)

the pylon aura is to big to fit in the cave. And I made it so the cave is out of the water falling. I'll see if it looks cool if i put water over it.

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