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The first sample of similar terrain is found Here

Since I'm making another trailer, and its medieval based I thought this was a pretty good practise. Here's the image. I am not good at terrain myself, and I can see some imperfections already. However, here's my go at it =)

His is good because he made it big. Yours is small, and you tried to cramp all of the things he has into yours, but it just doesn't fit.

It's a little blocky, but all and all, it looks very nice. It'd be cool to see a battle on there.

Uhh..I love it, it looks very nice. Although a bit blocky, it looks abnormaly sweet.

It looks very nicE! A little blocky, but could be fixed

Now for my reply.
Yes I can see that it's sorta blocky, but as I could see ways to improve it. The only problem I'm seeing is that Your not actually going anywhere with it, it would simply exsists as that peice of terrain unless you add doors or some way out of that area. It sorta reminds me of qPirateKings take on my temple a while back. Anyway, I just have to say that although it needs slight adjustments here and there, overall it's pretty good!

Look ok. Blocky but like you said your aren't really good at it. I'm not either. But the Twilight sprites in my opinion don't really seem to fit with the temple.

Yeah, I tried to make it small because I thought it will be easier to see the whole structure in game view. Thanks for input though, I'll consider making it bigger in other attempts.



Thanks =P I'll try finding more suitable tiles to blend with to fix it =)
About the battle, kekekeke.



Yeah, thanks for the comment Rave =)



Thanks noobie, I'll try spending more times fixing imperfections in other terrain I make. I really like the smiley at the end, the post won't look as um, 'tense-minded' I guess



The god finally answered. Yeah, I realised there was really no room to walk on. Thanks for encouragement overall!



Thanks for construction critisism, I'll practise more on sprite usage going with the atmosphere.

Thanks to all who replied!

Try and hide blocky areas with tree sprites

This kinda temple thing is old, people has made this sort of things before. Yours is very blocky, it sure can be fixed, it's too small so some square terrain just not fit in. Now to the sprites, I see you have used twillight sprites that doesn't fit in at all, and in some ways the sprites doesn't fit in at all, like the tree on the top of the temple. You could actually try to blend it so it will look more soft and less blocky.

Or else, good job

Or you could actually make the terrain look good and fix the blocky areas. Your choice, of course.

thats pretty good, I like it. Your good at terrianing and I wish my star craft would work, then I could get back to work on terrian!

Looks good, a bit blocky like the others said but im sure u can fix that. Nice job

Wow. This topic as had "blocky" in it somewhere in every post (including mine). I think they're trying to tell you something . I think this is one of the coolest things I've ever seen. It's sweet all right, though it appears to be small (limiting possibly play-on-ability), but it's very cool looking. I haven't ever seen anything like This before, so of course, I'm not comparing it to anything even close to comporable.

"Blocky..." Whatever the hell that means, I guess I'll figure out in a few more weeks...

Be original..Ive seen this done before.

like you could do better?

I think it looks good, although a little blocky.

i think it doesnt need to be original, T-virus. he needs a temple for his new map so this is a temple.

i like it alot, except i really dont like the 2 blue twilight pillar things. please remove them.

Although the bulk of the terrain isn't original, he has added original ideas and brought it farther than it was before.

You're Screwed T-Virus~

rofl t-virus ur a homosexual and your picture is gay, Screwed you did a fine job on your temple, considering you consider yourself a non-good terrainer, i personally think its good, just some parts a lil block

it could be like a temple that goes underwater and ur dropped of by teleportation/transportation.

You want my opinion? It's not hard to make that. Sure, it looks good, but it's something that's been done before. The stacked cliff temples has been done, and it was never the greatest. T-Virus has a point, and you guys want to know something? It's not that hard to make that. In fact, I could make it, and could make it less blocky while I'm at it. How about something new, people? Get away from the tired temple terrain, try something with badlands, try something with desert, come on, give Twilight some love. Ashworld even, hell, I'll give all my minerals to anyone who goes into Ashworld and makes something besides "hell" and "magma world". Space, although cluttered and ugly, certainly has some potential with in it. Ice could definitely use some extended attempts. The truth is that all the tilesets have their own strengths and weaknesses, and all of them have potential. Jungle, IMO, is actually one of the more limited tilesets, only making jungle, forest, grass, temples and ruins. However, Badlands can make jungles, forests, temples, ruins, modern cities, destroyed cities, futuristic cities, building interiors, and with sprites, hell, badlands is the most verstile. Twilight also has alot of applications, if you're willing to look past the blueness. So come on. Let's see some effort.

Being perfectly honest, yours is good but his is better. =/ sry.

Hey, doesn't twilight have the most amount of different elevations?

All terrain is divided into three levels, twilight has just as many as everything else.
Except space. Do you know what the extra one for space is?

im on it