Welcome.
I wouldn't try pure island maps like this, because toss beats zerg hands down.
http://promaps.deported.net/ has some good maps (a link to that site should be stickied, and I should talk to excal and force him to put some of the newer maps on there
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About your map: the positions are not fair; imagine a player starting in the bottom versus one in the midde. The middle has several closer expos. Your mineral placement isn't good, either. Check out that site for mineral-placement, as well.
After loking at that site, I'm sure your next map will be much better. I know it helped me.
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I'll fix the mineral placement at the mains. I kinda went for some unusual mineral placement at the several expansions. And should I take the gas away from two of the expansions?
Since it's an island map, doesn't it not matter if some bases are closer to certain expos than others. They can't just walk to the other resources. Maybe I'm wrong, I dunno. I should really spend more time on these.
And there's no need for a welcome, I'm a regular, I just don't post here much.