Report, edit, etc...Posted by Infested-Jerk on 2005-07-03 at 12:48:18
It's not complete, or organized. (Or spellchecked... 
)
I'm NOT going to put this into RTF for apples, sorry, but quotation marks like to mess up when I do that
anwyays...
I want CONSTRUCTIVE Critism. The people I've been sending i to. (My friends) Don't have much, so I'm trying here!
Enjoy!
)I'm NOT going to put this into RTF for apples, sorry, but quotation marks like to mess up when I do that
anwyays...
I want CONSTRUCTIVE Critism. The people I've been sending i to. (My friends) Don't have much, so I'm trying here!
Enjoy!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Chef on 2005-07-03 at 12:57:11
I'll spell check it for you as I read through.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Chef on 2005-07-03 at 12:59:09
Actually... screw it, your storys to long and I only changed by to be, sorry. I'm just not interested in stories about elves and stuff.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Chef on 2005-07-03 at 13:01:14
Good luck with that...
thanks...
I won't add anything else until you are done, that way you can send it back if you spell check it.
I hope it's no to confusing...
ADDITION:
Unless you can convince me of a clever writing tool you used in the story
ADDITION:
That was wierd...
thanks...
I won't add anything else until you are done, that way you can send it back if you spell check it.
I hope it's no to confusing...
ADDITION:
Unless you can convince me of a clever writing tool you used in the story
ADDITION:
That was wierd...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Infested-Jerk on 2005-07-03 at 13:02:57
It's okay!
Just like me say
I HATE
SPELLCHECKING
Just like me say
I HATE
SPELLCHECKING Report, edit, etc...Posted by Tarh on 2005-07-03 at 14:09:23
I enjoy reading things like this.
I MIGHT do some spell checking and things while I am reading it. No promises though . . .
I can, however, say that I will be posting feedback for sure.
ADDITION:
I formatted and spell checked up to the point where they attacked the goblins. That seemed to be the hardest part. It is still in RTF format.
As for feedback . . .
The story is excellent, but . . . Not to be rude or anything but the writing is lacking detail somewhat. An excellent RP, however.
May I ask just what you plan on doing with this document?
Anyway, good luck on whatever it is you're doing.
I MIGHT do some spell checking and things while I am reading it. No promises though . . .
I can, however, say that I will be posting feedback for sure.
ADDITION:
I formatted and spell checked up to the point where they attacked the goblins. That seemed to be the hardest part. It is still in RTF format.
As for feedback . . .
The story is excellent, but . . . Not to be rude or anything but the writing is lacking detail somewhat. An excellent RP, however.
May I ask just what you plan on doing with this document?
Anyway, good luck on whatever it is you're doing.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Infested-Jerk on 2005-07-03 at 17:48:01
Well, just writing, I've sent it to some close friends, especially those who ahd some part in the character development. YEah, maybe I'll run through and add some more flesh to it when I finish chapter three.
ADDITION:
Oh yeah, I don't plan to do too much with this, If I complete it, I might save it for when I'm much older, revise and then see about getting published, but not now!
ADDITION:
Oh yeah, I don't plan to do too much with this, If I complete it, I might save it for when I'm much older, revise and then see about getting published, but not now!