Report, edit, etc...Posted by Spartan-004 on 2005-07-20 at 02:49:23
Hey, this is Spartan-004. Im making an RPG called
''Eternal Darkness RPG''.
Now, this is my first RPG ever making, so please rate it #/10.
I appriciate it if you don't put me down alot. Its ok if you dont like it though.
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-=[¯_-INTRO-_¯]=-
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Holyness, Light, Joyfulness and content.
These were the best and only things about this small but busy town named
after its holy temple: ''The Land Of Light''.
Its temple: '' The Temple Of Light'' was perfectly fine, But then, all of the sudden,
a Mage Called '' Nurakos '' heard that there was a temple of light.
The evil mage turned every one and thing into monsters, but when the town saw
it, they sent guards with guns. the mage coulden't turn them into monsters,
vecause he has to escape.
*Gun shots*.
''He got away....''
The whole town is scared, so they sent a Specialest.
''Nurkos''
Now Nurkos has chosen the path of light and joy.
But '' Nurakos '' Has chosen the path of darkness and Hatred.
They are both brothers, equal strength.
Light VS Dark.
Who will win?
Nobody knows for sure, but at this moment, ''The Land Of Light''
is ''Blessed'' with Eternal Darkness.
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-=[¯_-STORYLINE-_¯]=-
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There are three Power Stones, each of them posesses power, which teaches you a new ability.
But they are scattered all over The Land Of Light, which has been overan by darkness.
The three stones will be difficult for Nurkos to recover from darkness,
Since there are monsters every where.
Once the three Power Stones are recovered, you must Defeat Nurakos
(who is guarding the temple)
and set the three gems in the temple.
Once you have achieved your goal, the 3 power stones will grant you one wish.
You wish to spread Light, Joy, Content and Holyness
All over The Land Of Light.
But, Norakos is not defeated! he sent a clone to there to guard the temple!
Norakos gives up magic and chooses the path of a Dark Chaos Fighter.
Will you defeat his real self?
You'll have to play the game!!!
Spartan-004
Ok, I NOW HAVE THE SCREEN SHOTS!
Special thanks to Slayer766 and snipe.... a bit ;D
Any ways, ill start off with the town.
Now, the town again.
Now, the Potion Shop.
Don't worry, ur safe
Even safer! YAY
Don't you love little rocky beachs?
Playing hard to get, eh?
Mommy, am I going to live?
''Eternal Darkness RPG''.
Now, this is my first RPG ever making, so please rate it #/10.
I appriciate it if you don't put me down alot. Its ok if you dont like it though.
_________
-=[¯_-INTRO-_¯]=-
¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯
Holyness, Light, Joyfulness and content.
These were the best and only things about this small but busy town named
after its holy temple: ''The Land Of Light''.
Its temple: '' The Temple Of Light'' was perfectly fine, But then, all of the sudden,
a Mage Called '' Nurakos '' heard that there was a temple of light.
The evil mage turned every one and thing into monsters, but when the town saw
it, they sent guards with guns. the mage coulden't turn them into monsters,
vecause he has to escape.
*Gun shots*.
''He got away....''
The whole town is scared, so they sent a Specialest.
''Nurkos''
Now Nurkos has chosen the path of light and joy.
But '' Nurakos '' Has chosen the path of darkness and Hatred.
They are both brothers, equal strength.
Light VS Dark.
Who will win?
Nobody knows for sure, but at this moment, ''The Land Of Light''
is ''Blessed'' with Eternal Darkness.
______________
-=[¯_-STORYLINE-_¯]=-
¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯
There are three Power Stones, each of them posesses power, which teaches you a new ability.
But they are scattered all over The Land Of Light, which has been overan by darkness.
The three stones will be difficult for Nurkos to recover from darkness,
Since there are monsters every where.
Once the three Power Stones are recovered, you must Defeat Nurakos
(who is guarding the temple)
and set the three gems in the temple.
Once you have achieved your goal, the 3 power stones will grant you one wish.
You wish to spread Light, Joy, Content and Holyness
All over The Land Of Light.
But, Norakos is not defeated! he sent a clone to there to guard the temple!
Norakos gives up magic and chooses the path of a Dark Chaos Fighter.
Will you defeat his real self?
You'll have to play the game!!!
Spartan-004
Ok, I NOW HAVE THE SCREEN SHOTS!
Special thanks to Slayer766 and snipe.... a bit ;D
Any ways, ill start off with the town.
Now, the town again.
Now, the Potion Shop.
Don't worry, ur safe
Even safer! YAY
Don't you love little rocky beachs?
Playing hard to get, eh?
Mommy, am I going to live?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by IceWarrior98 on 2005-07-20 at 03:18:28
Not bad storyline, Intro may need some work however mainly because you repeat the same words over and it gets tedious. Other than that id say 8/10.
ADDITION:
But wheres the game? Or are you going to make it?
ADDITION:
But wheres the game? Or are you going to make it?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mini Moose 2707 on 2005-07-20 at 11:11:41
How do you rate a map without a map? And Map Assistance isn't for this kind of assistance. 
» Moved to Maps in Production.
» Moved to Maps in Production.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Snipe on 2005-07-20 at 14:03:54
I told you Spartan.. Please think about where you put it next time. Your lucky Minimoose saw it b4 any 1 else 
. Minimoose in a good mood . Anyways. You should start your map and post it. Just so people get the feel of it. It doesn't sound bad though if you go through with it.
. Minimoose in a good mood . Anyways. You should start your map and post it. Just so people get the feel of it. It doesn't sound bad though if you go through with it.Report, edit, etc...Posted by Spartan-004 on 2005-07-20 at 14:17:30
QUOTE(Snipe @ Jul 20 2005, 12:03 PM)
I told you Spartan.. Please think about where you put it next time. Your lucky Minimoose saw it b4 any 1 else . Minimoose in a good mood . Anyways. You should start your map and post it. Just so people get the feel of it. It doesn't sound bad though if you go through with it.
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. Minimoose in a good mood . Anyways. You should start your map and post it. Just so people get the feel of it. It doesn't sound bad though if you go through with it.[right][snapback]266347[/snapback][/right]
Ok, ill post it as soon as i finish the terrain.
One small problem, how do you post a map?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Forsaken on 2005-07-20 at 14:30:02
Not bad. Storyline could use a little polishing though. (I love good storylines).
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Spartan-004 on 2005-07-20 at 14:32:04
QUOTE(Forsaken @ Jul 20 2005, 12:30 PM)
Not bad. Storyline could use a little polishing though. (I love good storylines).
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Ok, but can anyone plz RATE THIS?!?!?! lol ;D
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Snipe on 2005-07-20 at 14:40:20
O yea i forgot to rate it.. i will say 6/10. Just becuase the story could be a little better . Still good though. How you attatch a map is b4 you send you reply there is somthing ontop called Attachemtns (browser)(Add this attachment) Browse for your file than add than Press Reply and the map will be added to your reply.
. Still good though. How you attatch a map is b4 you send you reply there is somthing ontop called Attachemtns (browser)(Add this attachment) Browse for your file than add than Press Reply and the map will be added to your reply.Report, edit, etc...Posted by slayer766 on 2005-07-20 at 15:52:03
Don't forget to add into post! 
I would rate this a 6/10 also because you can do better on your storyline, to spiff it up and make it really cool and interesting. Good luck with it though.
I would rate this a 6/10 also because you can do better on your storyline, to spiff it up and make it really cool and interesting. Good luck with it though.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Spartan-004 on 2005-07-20 at 16:10:13
Ok, here are my SS'.
I jus took them
Town
town again
Potion shop
WTF?
Im safe!
Im safe2!
Mommy, you landed on my boardwalk! 2000 dollars please!
Wait... snipe, wtf... its says at top: upload failed. you are not permitted to upload a file with that file extension.wtf... wat do i do now?
I jus took them
Town
town again
Potion shop
WTF?
Im safe!
Im safe2!
Mommy, you landed on my boardwalk! 2000 dollars please!
Wait... snipe, wtf... its says at top: upload failed. you are not permitted to upload a file with that file extension.wtf... wat do i do now?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Urmom(U) on 2005-07-20 at 19:06:00
you have to change the screenshot to a jpeg. i think there is something called infranview in the DLDB
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Spartan-004 on 2005-07-20 at 19:35:07
DLDB?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by slayer766 on 2005-07-20 at 21:20:12
I could tell ya' how to add in your screenshots.
1.) You take a picture of your screen in the Game, by hitting the
"prt scr" button on your keyboard.
2.) The screenshot that you took will be saved in your "Starcraft"
folder under the file extension of .PCX (Ex. screen00.PCX)
3.) Then you will need to change the filename extension to a .JPG
You can do this by downloading Infranview. Here's the link:
Download InfranView Here
4.) Now if your not sure on how to change from a .PCX to a .JPG
just follow these instructions. Open Infranview>Open your screenshot
that you took in the .PCX extension>Then hit "File" "Save as">Then
in that window where it says "Save as type" click on the dropbar
button to bring up a list of file extensions>Choose the extension
.JPG - JPEG Files>There now you have turned a .PCX file into a .JPG
5.) Now to post the screenshot on SEN, just simply go down to the
"File Attachments" in the "Reply" button.
6.) Then hit "Browse" find you newly created .JPG screenshot.
Click on "Open" Then hit "Add This Attachment" right next to the
browse button.
7.) Once that's done, click anywhere on the text display box, where you would type in your stuff, then to the right of the "Add This Attachment" button you should see your file, then click on "Add Into Post" And there you have it, your screenshot has been added. Hope you will get your screenshots up, from my long explaination.
Just my little explaination on how to add and post screenshots on SEN. By the way DLDB = DownLoad DataBase
1.) You take a picture of your screen in the Game, by hitting the
"prt scr" button on your keyboard.
2.) The screenshot that you took will be saved in your "Starcraft"
folder under the file extension of .PCX (Ex. screen00.PCX)
3.) Then you will need to change the filename extension to a .JPG
You can do this by downloading Infranview. Here's the link:
Download InfranView Here
4.) Now if your not sure on how to change from a .PCX to a .JPG
just follow these instructions. Open Infranview>Open your screenshot
that you took in the .PCX extension>Then hit "File" "Save as">Then
in that window where it says "Save as type" click on the dropbar
button to bring up a list of file extensions>Choose the extension
.JPG - JPEG Files>There now you have turned a .PCX file into a .JPG
5.) Now to post the screenshot on SEN, just simply go down to the
"File Attachments" in the "Reply" button.
6.) Then hit "Browse" find you newly created .JPG screenshot.
Click on "Open" Then hit "Add This Attachment" right next to the
browse button.
7.) Once that's done, click anywhere on the text display box, where you would type in your stuff, then to the right of the "Add This Attachment" button you should see your file, then click on "Add Into Post" And there you have it, your screenshot has been added.
Hope you will get your screenshots up, from my long explaination. Just my little explaination on how to add and post screenshots on SEN. By the way DLDB = DownLoad DataBase
Report, edit, etc...Posted by TheOddAngel on 2005-07-20 at 21:39:04
Would you mind not taking my map name?
If you search the topics a topic a while back is closed but I am still
secretly working on the map...
If you search the topics a topic a while back is closed but I am still
secretly working on the map...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Snipe on 2005-07-20 at 22:19:06
Well thats interesting? He stole the name?? I guess he will have to change it or make #2 and also.. Spartan i thought you would have noticed to put it to Jmpg.. I guess you had it at bmp.. Anyways. Follow Slayer instructions and Fix up your post/ Name of Rpg.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Urmom(U) on 2005-07-21 at 00:09:30
QUOTE(TheOddAngel @ Jul 20 2005, 09:39 PM)
Would you mind not taking my map name?
If you search the topics a topic a while back is closed but I am still
secretly working on the map...
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If you search the topics a topic a while back is closed but I am still
secretly working on the map...
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its hard to exactly know when to not use people's map ideas when the topic is locked
basically when you say quit rpg making it makes your ideas open to the public. but ya you change the name because it reminds me of oddangels rpg 
and its copyingReport, edit, etc...Posted by Spartan-004 on 2005-07-22 at 02:29:45
Uhhh... I didnt steal your map, you hsould change name, its your fault for making it secret.
Actually, Fine, Ill change the name, only cuz ur a girl, ON ONE CONDITION!!!
**DUM DUM DUM....*
YOU have to help ME with a new map name that suits the story. BUT, it has to be decent, or better of course 
Actually, Fine, Ill change the name, only cuz ur a girl, ON ONE CONDITION!!!
**DUM DUM DUM....*
YOU have to help ME with a new map name that suits the story. BUT, it has to be decent, or better of course
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Neiji on 2005-07-22 at 11:04:52
Mine, it says like what the name will be and what type of file you want it to be, instead of instant saving...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Spartan-004 on 2005-07-24 at 22:42:38
.....What do you mean?