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Report, edit, etc...Posted by blizter on 2005-08-17 at 15:09:22

Well this is my first terrain and i need to know what you think of it.

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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Syphon on 2005-08-17 at 15:51:07

some are blocky but mostly good /10

Report, edit, etc...Posted by T-MaStAA on 2005-08-17 at 15:58:22

i like em alot... some are hall of fame worthy...

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Ninebreaker on 2005-08-17 at 15:58:24

I see that you can place sprites, but the top part of the temple looks like its the same size as the bottom parts. Try to make it bigger 7.5/10

Report, edit, etc...Posted by TRiGGaMaSTa on 2005-08-17 at 16:28:48

With terrain like this is don't complain about blockiness cause it's something you'll never be able to achieve perfectly blended. gj it gives me the feel of being outside a mayan temple or something.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by glytchur on 2005-08-17 at 17:03:02

very good for first terrain

Report, edit, etc...Posted by blizter on 2005-08-17 at 17:06:25

There i think i fixed it

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Fixed the cliff too

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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Voyager7456(MM) on 2005-08-17 at 17:12:40

Nice terrain, (I really like the temple->temple stairs), but I think there's a few too many sprites... although I'm not sure, they could be there to cover up blockyness.

Could you show us what it looks like without sprites?

8.5/10

I agree, it does have a very Mayan feel to it.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Wilhelm on 2005-08-17 at 17:17:16

Pretty nice stuff, but it all seems a little awkward and not planned out, as I said when you showed it to me earlier. I liked the temple a bit better. I'd be willing to fix it up a tad. I really like the statue in the wall side.. it's really well placed. Funny how bonelesskid criticized my mountain, which has minimal blockyness, but says "oh this stuff just can't be blended", funny, since some of the mountain blends are impossible as well. Well, 6/10, since it's got some nice little bits, but some sprite placement isn't too good, and the whole unplanned appearance.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by DorkeyDear on 2005-08-17 at 17:24:19

Not bad for your first try. I'll give you a 7.5 out of 10.

Still spots that are blocky. If you can't fix it with terrain, fix it by covering it with sprites. (But do not over use sprites or it will look worse than b4.)

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Zeph on 2005-08-17 at 17:28:20

That's actually nice, good job!

ADDITION:
What kinda map is it going to be?
Snipers, RPG...?

Report, edit, etc...Posted by blizter on 2005-08-17 at 17:31:16

W/o Sprite

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What kinda map is it going to be? Snipers, RPG...?

I do that for fun

If i want to use it i will probably make a brush of the whole terrain and paste it in a bigger map. Then i will probably make a rpg out of it.

I dont have ideas for a rpg right now :\

I tryed to make it least blocky w/o sprites and its pretty hard

Report, edit, etc...Posted by CrazyNinja on 2005-08-17 at 19:15:36

nice.... 8/10

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Corbo(MM) on 2005-08-17 at 23:54:06

some of them are a lil blocky in what i see i also see you like to waste sprites but no problem you almost used them wisely i really really like the path in #4 so overall 8/10

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Sniper on 2005-08-18 at 01:17:04

Pretty good as your first. Just a little bit too spritey and some blockiness could be fixed.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by TRiGGaMaSTa on 2005-08-18 at 02:25:41

you got me now 10/10 really nice work i wanna see more. i really like the 2 temple doors in the corner with the hole on top. thats crazy.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Chronophobia on 2005-08-18 at 09:32:19

Cut down the sprites, else it was pretty good mate!

Report, edit, etc...Posted by glytchur on 2005-08-18 at 18:33:58

QUOTE(WoodenFire @ Aug 18 2005, 04:41 PM)

I give this a 2 of 10.
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wtf?
did u even read that this is his first terrain?

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Syphon on 2005-08-18 at 19:50:42

QUOTE(blizter @ Aug 18 2005, 04:30 PM)

I admit my terrain isnt perfect and you are good in terrain. This is not a reason to be so hard with other mappers. Personnaly i think this is almost impossible to blend the stair perfectly with walkable terrain (for the temple to temple one) You did some hard comments in wilhelm thread too just because you dont like him. Nobody here can do perfect terrain, i saw your terrain and if my terrain is 2/10, yours is something like 6/10.
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if he gives this 2 he should get 1

Report, edit, etc...Posted by WoodenFire on 2005-08-18 at 20:30:56

Uh... I didn't kno you guys gave a curve to new terrain makers... in that case, this is 13 of 10! Good work bliz!

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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Syphon on 2005-08-18 at 20:32:18

Welcome back to the light

Report, edit, etc...Posted by SacredElf on 2005-08-18 at 20:34:06

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Uh... I didn't kno you guys gave a curve to new terrain makers... in that case, this is 13 of 10! Good work bliz!

his terrain is pretty okay, but no, for u it sux... i give u a 7.5

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Syphon on 2005-08-18 at 21:43:01

QUOTE(WoodenFire @ Aug 18 2005, 06:57 PM)

...another flamer? ugh... calm down guys... wow
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you start it

Report, edit, etc...Posted by WoodenFire on 2005-08-18 at 21:55:55

QUOTE(syphon8 @ Aug 18 2005, 07:43 PM)

you start it
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you continue it

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Syphon on 2005-08-18 at 23:56:02

QUOTE(WoodenFire @ Aug 18 2005, 07:55 PM)

you continue it
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Yes, I am the wood to your flame.... WoodenFire

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