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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Sniper on 2005-08-22 at 01:06:30
This is the first waterfall I've done, just took some time to improve on my extended terrain. Rate it and tell me what you think biggrin.gif

Oh, and if it's bad don't say BLAH BLAH BLAH It sucks 2/10. Tell me how to improve it.

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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Wilhelm on 2005-08-22 at 01:16:40
Well, for one, some variation in the cliff faces to make them look natural would help. Um, a few tiles on the side should be cliff, instead. The trees don't look natural, I suggest using rock sprites, or something that matches the cliffs better. and what's with the rocks at the bottom?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Sniper on 2005-08-22 at 01:42:59
Usually, when you see a waterfall, there are rocks near the bottom.

ADDITION:
And I would've done the cliff variation but its my first time doing an elevated cliff so I copied and pasted the first one that looked good -.-.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Hitl1r1 on 2005-08-22 at 01:57:29
Looks pretty good Sniper better then much i have done. The cliff looks funny because theres no variation as Wilhelm said, but i give a 8/10 in my opinion
Report, edit, etc...Posted by glytchur on 2005-08-23 at 09:33:41
yay it has real cliffs on either side, but there really repetitive like wil said, its a nice waterfall, but u need it to match up with the bottom, like if the waterfall is however long, u dont want the bottom to be shorter than that, have the bottom bigger if anything, thatll help with some blockyness, and u dont need those rocks sprites at the bottom...
but good overall, 7/10
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Valug on 2005-08-23 at 16:21:01
BLAH BLAH BLAH It sucks 2/10

Jk wink.gif

It looks pretty nice, the trees do look unnatural, and try to cut down on the sprites, you should be able to pool it off with 2 or 3 (Not the waterfall ones of course). The cliff is the same tiles over and over and doesent look good.

6/10
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Voyager7456(MM) on 2005-08-23 at 16:59:18
I like how the sides give the impression of there being rapids in the water. 8.25/10
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Corbo(MM) on 2005-08-23 at 17:01:58
k yeah near the waterfalls there are always rocks but don't place that one place the other sprite that it's not high and it matches really well with the cliff hmm the trees look unatural because they are too near the waterfall they are almost in it and they cover the waterfall over all i give it a 7.95457658658/10 = 8/10
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Fortune on 2005-08-24 at 09:03:11
I think it looks good for a waterfall, not overdone.

The rock sprites I could live without though.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by TheOddAngel on 2005-08-24 at 09:11:43
you said bloody waterfall... Wheres the blood? cry.gif I was hoping for something new mellow.gif
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Fortune on 2005-08-24 at 10:32:47
Bloody like the British term.

Ex: "I hate those bloody French!"
Report, edit, etc...Posted by TheOddAngel on 2005-08-24 at 22:39:58
I know but it woulda been cool if there actualy was a bloody waterfall bleh.gif
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Sniper on 2005-08-25 at 02:33:24
Lets add some cloaked hatcherys!!!! somehow...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Syphon on 2005-08-25 at 11:55:21
wouldnt that be shadowy? rapidly kill scourges all over
Report, edit, etc...Posted by TheOddAngel on 2005-08-25 at 13:15:06
IDEA:

Make a square tile that can have a marine or something on it.
put a floor trap on it...
Kill the marine
and add A pylon Aura Sprite smile.gif
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Sniper on 2005-08-25 at 13:27:16
lol thats right. It will spurt blood from the middle of the waterfall -.-.
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