Well this is my first REAL melee map it seems pretty cool
many people have told me the bases are to small but they are bigger then they appear, look at it try it out some input would be great
Looks cool.
the vertical path in mid-right is kinda small...
also, this isnt a big deal, but not all the semi-chokes are the same size. but thats no biggie.
All the bases vary too much. Its okay if they dont look the same, but they have to be equal. And easy 3 bases for terran, and playing zerg would be very interesting.
It looks good but i can see where you could improve, make it bigger and when you are making it, and add more detail in the terrain and i think you will be well off.
Lots of problems with this map.
1. The alternative entrances are far too unbalanced. Too narrow or too wide. They should be the same. (Example would be Red's base is way too narrow)
2. Mineral expansions are not very balanced. The natural is all right, but I think the 2nd expo doesn't need a gas. Personally, I would probably keep the gas on the 2nd expo and remove the vespene on the first one. Play around with it.
3. The main entrance are either too far or too close. They should be the same as well.
Not required, but I would highly suggest decorating the map with more doodads and varied tilesets.
This is very nice for your first map, however:
The mains are fairly small which isn't a big deal, however, the expos are extremely small, go ahead an keep the mains the same size, but mabye you could make the gas expos a little larger. There are also a few other issues with the terrain such as red's entrance is closer to the start point than purple's is.