I did this a little while ago, posted it once, got feedback, improved it...
Basically what I did was turn this:
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into this:
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Any comments?
I guess you did a good job...
(woot first post)
The beam hes shooting is too big I find. Especially the part on the gun.
It would be alot better if the beam was smaller.
Okay...
Actually, the first picture was the second phase. Let me look around for the original picture...
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ADDITION:
There. Found it.
ADDITION:
Aah! The final product is wrong too!
Lemme see...
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And then I edited it again to improve the alignment...
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