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well i basicly just started doing terrain so i decided to start with sumthin easy
a waterfall!!

but in game i have observers moving for a water effect
plz rate
and keep in mind this is my FIRST so go easy on me

Looks ok, just put a little work in the water before the waterfall, near the bridge, it looks like installation floor, consists of squares but after all it's nice.

ya well ive seen those traps done in other peoples waterfalls
but idk what else i can do their, just water tiles?

Very blocky...

It doesn't seem to have continuity in the "movement" of the water, likely due to your placement of water tiles. The right edge is basically detached as well, so it looks more like a sheet fluttering in the wind than a waterfall. Also, the bottom left just abruptly stops and the whole left edge appear connected to the wall. I think you get the idea of the waterfall but not how to space it or use everything properly.

This is just to point out what's wrong, not to go OMG YOU ARE THE SUCK!!

4/10

Nice bridge though, excepting the block thing at the end.

ya i know it needs work and 4/10 for my first time yay im not horrible
and idont see which part is blocky

The right end of the bridge. One-tile wide thing that stands out a lot from the rest of it.

o yeah didnt notice that :/
but i still dont think that constitutes as VERY blocky

better than i can do

ADDITION:
just dont do the bone cliff thing so much, it makes it look artificial

6/10 i like it's not a new idea but it's ok for beginner.

Blocky and I don't like the tiles on top.

Nice try though keep working at it.

3/10

most people dont post their very first try at terrain they work on it for a little bit. til they get the rythem. unless this guy has plain talent

Yeah, I suppose, but if it is ACTUALLY his first then he will probably be the best at terraining, maybe even better than WoodenFire..... Maybe not, I don't know ..

ADDITION:
OMGZ0RZS!!!oneone!!shiftone!!two!! I have 667 minerals I'm sending the excess mineral to Yoshi!!

i think its a sexi waterfall

i think most of us are good at it or else we wouldn't post our terrain. most of us are board as junk. so we just do terrain.

2/10

kinda good waterfall, no effects?

cliff has some wrong peices... its ok for now, before glytcher's 2nd edition of cliff making, id expect nothing more then around 50% wrongness

good try anyways... gives me some ideas, so thats good.

not to complain wood but i havent seen ne thing but jungle from you, why dont you try somthin harder? then we will see ur real skill...

well i had observers going from top to bottom for a :water: effect and i was thinkin i couldve done sum hallucination deaths for bottom
and btw!!!!
for sf triggers when i do create unit w/ prop i go through and idk what number hallucination is :/

I'll just reiterate what was said when I posted my waterfall:

The tree sprites are unnatural. Place them where their roots would make sense, and spread them out more.

Also, the tiles you used for the waterfall contrast too much, making it look blocky. Try using the darker water tiles for the waterfall; it blends more.

Edit: I also noticed that you repeated the same two cliff types for each level. Vary the cliff types more.

pretty good but im sure you can make it better just looking at it for a while and editing it

Well a bit blocky, but seriously, what can you expect from a first try. It's good you posted your terrain so you can get tips and help on it. It is always good to post your terrain and ask for a bit of help, because most people on here are willing to help you make perfect terrain. Good job on it. Just work a bit on the blocks.