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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Farseer on 2006-01-24 at 02:29:12

Hi all! Please rate those screens... Its my first terrain...

1. Port for my old RPG map...

2.Beach in Badlands terrain...

3.Bridge in Jungle...

Please rate it normally I just want to know opinions of specialists... thx

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Ja12 on 2006-01-24 at 05:21:47

Its not so shackinng but it still ok
im think its will be 6.5/10

by the way Farseer Whats you doing here ?

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Farseer on 2006-01-24 at 08:23:17

Heh thx

Udaje sztuczny tłum wiesz

Sry

... I just came here for some advice and to show my works

Report, edit, etc...Posted by glytchur on 2006-01-24 at 09:46:09

i hate when you guys post pics that i have to use firefox to see, i dont mind using firefox its just that my firefox is messed up and i have to go back to mozilla to post...
anyway, there alright, nothing new, but the in corner part of the third pic is nicer than most people do it without sprites, good for your first terrain...

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Son) on 2006-01-24 at 11:58:58

pretty good but the 2nd one is pretty blocky..nice tho

Report, edit, etc...Posted by 5(U) on 2006-01-24 at 15:15:44

QUOTE(Son) @ Jan 24 2006, 11:58 AM)

pretty good but the 2nd one is pretty blocky..nice tho
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there are 10 (tell me if u see more, im not x-pert) blocky tiles.. on 273

thats a total of 3.66% of tiles

a good example of a "pretty blocky" would be the ling in woodenfire's sig

i would qualify the 2nd terrain has "not perfect and sometimes blocky" but its not that bad

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Farseer on 2006-01-24 at 15:39:31

Yeah Ive got some problem with blending ;/... But thx for opinions

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.HydrA.oO on 2006-01-24 at 20:17:46

Thats not bad at all.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by WoodenFire on 2006-01-25 at 13:35:25

Are you blind or something? I see far over 50 errors. Unacceptable.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by glytchur on 2006-01-25 at 14:46:00

50...

50?

Report, edit, etc...Posted by KABOOM on 2006-01-25 at 16:53:12

not joking i saw quite abit too maybe not 50 but around there. its nothin knew our special but its hard to do that since everything has been made pretty much

(omg i'm turnin into wooden

)

Report, edit, etc...Posted by StarCraft411 on 2006-01-25 at 19:11:15

their ok... i like em but ehh its ok i rate 7/10

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Deathawk on 2006-01-25 at 20:24:10

Unacceptable for a first timer?
I think not, and Wooden, you can make 50 circles on his terrain, or tell us where the blockyness is, or your words hold no worth.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Farseer on 2006-01-26 at 04:01:29

I know its hell blocky ;/... I just don't know "basic blending rules"

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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2006-01-26 at 16:46:28

You wouldn't post these if you really thought they sucked.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by SkuLL on 2006-01-28 at 21:27:57

Of course WoodenFire would consider it unacceptable. I heard he makes legendary terrain. But nice for your first terrain. I don't think I can make anything close to that.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Farseer on 2006-01-29 at 02:23:15

Thanks ;]... Today i'll make more ;]

Report, edit, etc...Posted by lll on 2006-01-29 at 17:43:39

I dont think its that bad. Good for a first time. gl

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Wilhelm on 2006-01-29 at 23:34:09

Ignore das WoodenFuhrer. He thinks he's the Uberterrainmench. Nice for a first try. The corners on the bridges can be easily fixed, by the way. Here's a brush featuring a "bridge to high dirt/ruins" setup. You CAN use these with the strandard bridge tiles, but the color different is fairly apparent. I suggest replacing the "walkway" tiles, if you get me, to high dirt or ruins. Grassless ruins work best (they're located within the "ruins edges" section).
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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Farseer on 2006-01-30 at 10:37:21

I can't dl this ;/

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Syphon on 2006-01-30 at 12:00:05

QUOTE(Dorkhawk @ Jan 25 2006, 08:24 PM)

Unacceptable for a first timer?
I think not, and Wooden, you can make 50 circles on his terrain, or tell us where the blockyness is, or your words hold no worth.
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Some circles I found INTERESTING. Maybe not 50, but i didn't count.

That one seemingly useless circles around that one civilian, it's not. He's facing teh wrong way!

My artwork in panel3 demonstrates how he SHOULD face.

QUOTE(Farseer @ Jan 26 2006, 04:01 AM)

I know its hell blocky ;/... I just don't know "basic blending rules"

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A) Make sure it flows, lines colour and texture.
B) Make sure it looks nice.

^ Basic blending rules summerized.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Deathawk on 2006-01-30 at 14:27:56

Most of those were not blocky, they just didn't look good. There is a difference. -_-

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Sie_Sayoka on 2006-01-30 at 15:31:30

OH MY GOD YOU GUYS!!!
ITS HIS FIRST TERRAIN!

instead of just showing him how he failed show him how to do better.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Farseer on 2006-01-30 at 16:32:57

... ehem... So ;] lol i suck at this ;/...
Ok give me few days and i'll make better terrains ;/

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Wilhelm on 2006-01-31 at 04:25:22

Agh, the attachment error. Forgot. Here...
http://jupiter.walagata.com/w/wilhelm/Corners.zip
Check that out. Don't let these noobs bother you. I've been doing terrain longer then these hacks (And their terrain is really uninspired).

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