Report, edit, etc...Posted by God_fenix on 2006-01-31 at 20:18:40
My campaign story and characters etc.
CHARACTERS:
Schri (Zeratul Model), Tela (Tassadar Model), Kwi'Ta (Fenix Model), Admiral Conetzi (Hyperion Model), Cerebrate Kris'Gath (Daggoth Model), Kree (Artanis Model)
TIME PLACE
100 Years before the infestation of Kerrigan
PLANETS
Planet Xion (Forest Planet) Moon Derak (Lava Moon)
PLACES:
TEMPLE OF KREE (Kree is the Ancient Warrior that turned the Protoss to believing them to be Shakna) Capital of Xion, Admiral's ship, Kris'Gath's capital, Schri's ship
RACES
ZERG
SHAKNA (then to Protoss)
TERRAN
STORY
100 Years before the infestation of Kerrigan... Protoss commander Tela and his Dark Templar Brethren named Schri were sent to a planet that was emitting powerful psionic energies. The planet Xion.
As the Protoss landed on the ship The Destructor near a temple that was emitting the psionic energies... the Protoss journeyed into the temple and found an ancient warrior of a different race (Shakna) he awakened and somehow used the psionic energy in the temple and knocked the Protoss out thus wiping there mind and suddenly making them believe they were Shakna.
Tela made a base near the ancient temple (a few clicks away) as they were working on there base Kwi'Ta claimed he saw some of Schri's Ghost Warriors (Shakna Dark Templar name) kill warriors or civilians. Tela ordered a meeting between them... inevitably the Ghost Warriors were banished from Tela. So Schri decided to build a base far from the temple.
They discovered they were betrayed. But Kwi'Ta sensed this also and sent the Zerg to attack Schri and his Ghost Warriors after battle after battle after battle, the Zerg suddenly stopped attacking and Schri decided to get some answers so he journeyed to the Temple of Kree. .
Kree awakened but found that he was the Shakna and Schri ordered some answered about Kwi'Ta and the Zerg... Kree told Schri about Kwi'Ta's connection with the Zerg. He said that Kwi'Ta was lied by the Zerg to survive was to join the Zerg and foolhardily he agreed... they didn’t infest him to the Swarm feeling they didn’t have to.
So Schri journey back to the capital wasn't hard for the Zerg suddenly must of retreated but when he arrived he found everyone nearly dead and the capital all burning in flames and saw the Zerg ravage the ENTIRE area. When Schri entered the capital he found Tela nearly dead.
Tela apologized his accusing Schri and Schri accepted before his dead but found Kwi'Ta staring the other direction watching the Zerg destroy all warriors there of the Shakna (or Protoss) Kwi'Ta annoyingly kept telling Schri told him to join the Swarm and they battled a lot. But suddenly as if Kree was with Schri gave him enough psionic abilities to defeat Kwi'Ta once and for all but before his death he realized he was wrong to ally with the Zerg... time to Schri suddenly froze. The Zerg then stopped and turned and chased Schri he got back in the capital ship "The Destructor" and then fled to another part of Xion but he found that the Zerg wanted to conquer the entire Galaxy not just the Shakna (Protoss) but then a Terran Admiral Conetzi called Xion.
Conetzi landed on the signal by Schri and told him about the "infinite" fleet of Zerg orbiting around Xion. Conetzi said that the Zerg came from a moon or so he knew called Derak a lavish planet. With the Terran aid they were able to gather enough power to wipe the Zerg at the capital of Xion and around the Temple of Kree and took the battle to the Stars.
In a ferocious battle between Zerg vs. Protoss and Terran. Two things the Zerg didn’t count on were the Terran aiding the Protoss and with two skilled war tacticians they were able to win the war and take the war to Derak.
Cerebrate Kris'Gath's capital moon and attacked but Kris'Gath found a way to make an "Infinite fleet" on the moon and nearly annihilated the Protoss and Terran but out of thin air (the Shakna teleportation) a entire ancient Shakna fleet with fire power more powerful than the Yamato Gun came in and tilt the scales to the Shakna/Protoss and Terran and won the battle Admiral Conetzi, Schri both landed on the moon and confronted the cerebrate thankfully Schri had the Dark Templar energies and was able to slaughter the cerebrate. But suddenly the moon suddenly started to crack and explode luckily the Shakna/Protoss and Terran escaped.
Admiral Conetzi and Schri went back to the temple and Kree thanked Schri and the Admiral for he said it was "prophecy" that he had to wipe the mind of the Protoss to save the Shakna from the Zerg's fleet for if the Zerg annihilated the planet of Xion and the remaining Ancient Shakna temples the Zerg would absorb it all and become MORE powerful for nothing to stop them. Kree then once again thanked them and knocked them out and restored Schri and the Ghost Warrior's memory (Dark Templar) to remembering they were Protoss.
Thanking Kree Schri went back to Auir to be honored, Schri asked if the Admiral would go but he declined and went back to his home planet of Tarsonis. Schri wasn’t just honored but he held a funeral for the fallen warriors Tela, Kwi'Ta and all the Shakna/Protoss that died and made a "shrine" for Kree. The Protoss had a ceremony for Schri and gave him title "Savior of the Galaxy" that the ceremony was echoed through the Galaxy to all who live. *Credits come*
IT IS NOT FINISHED IM AM CURRENTLY WORKING ON IT!
THE DAY OF RECKONING.
THIS IS MY NEW CAMPAIGN HOPE YOU LIKE IT!
Currently working on level 4 of it called DoR4: Vision of Truth
ADDITION:
Oh, one more thing, I have a history of my custom race at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shakna
ADDITION:
I plan to have it done in a few days and I will have screen shots soon.
What are your thoughts of my story?
CHARACTERS:
Schri (Zeratul Model), Tela (Tassadar Model), Kwi'Ta (Fenix Model), Admiral Conetzi (Hyperion Model), Cerebrate Kris'Gath (Daggoth Model), Kree (Artanis Model)
TIME PLACE
100 Years before the infestation of Kerrigan
PLANETS
Planet Xion (Forest Planet) Moon Derak (Lava Moon)
PLACES:
TEMPLE OF KREE (Kree is the Ancient Warrior that turned the Protoss to believing them to be Shakna) Capital of Xion, Admiral's ship, Kris'Gath's capital, Schri's ship
RACES
ZERG
SHAKNA (then to Protoss)
TERRAN
STORY
100 Years before the infestation of Kerrigan... Protoss commander Tela and his Dark Templar Brethren named Schri were sent to a planet that was emitting powerful psionic energies. The planet Xion.
As the Protoss landed on the ship The Destructor near a temple that was emitting the psionic energies... the Protoss journeyed into the temple and found an ancient warrior of a different race (Shakna) he awakened and somehow used the psionic energy in the temple and knocked the Protoss out thus wiping there mind and suddenly making them believe they were Shakna.
Tela made a base near the ancient temple (a few clicks away) as they were working on there base Kwi'Ta claimed he saw some of Schri's Ghost Warriors (Shakna Dark Templar name) kill warriors or civilians. Tela ordered a meeting between them... inevitably the Ghost Warriors were banished from Tela. So Schri decided to build a base far from the temple.
They discovered they were betrayed. But Kwi'Ta sensed this also and sent the Zerg to attack Schri and his Ghost Warriors after battle after battle after battle, the Zerg suddenly stopped attacking and Schri decided to get some answers so he journeyed to the Temple of Kree. .
Kree awakened but found that he was the Shakna and Schri ordered some answered about Kwi'Ta and the Zerg... Kree told Schri about Kwi'Ta's connection with the Zerg. He said that Kwi'Ta was lied by the Zerg to survive was to join the Zerg and foolhardily he agreed... they didn’t infest him to the Swarm feeling they didn’t have to.
So Schri journey back to the capital wasn't hard for the Zerg suddenly must of retreated but when he arrived he found everyone nearly dead and the capital all burning in flames and saw the Zerg ravage the ENTIRE area. When Schri entered the capital he found Tela nearly dead.
Tela apologized his accusing Schri and Schri accepted before his dead but found Kwi'Ta staring the other direction watching the Zerg destroy all warriors there of the Shakna (or Protoss) Kwi'Ta annoyingly kept telling Schri told him to join the Swarm and they battled a lot. But suddenly as if Kree was with Schri gave him enough psionic abilities to defeat Kwi'Ta once and for all but before his death he realized he was wrong to ally with the Zerg... time to Schri suddenly froze. The Zerg then stopped and turned and chased Schri he got back in the capital ship "The Destructor" and then fled to another part of Xion but he found that the Zerg wanted to conquer the entire Galaxy not just the Shakna (Protoss) but then a Terran Admiral Conetzi called Xion.
Conetzi landed on the signal by Schri and told him about the "infinite" fleet of Zerg orbiting around Xion. Conetzi said that the Zerg came from a moon or so he knew called Derak a lavish planet. With the Terran aid they were able to gather enough power to wipe the Zerg at the capital of Xion and around the Temple of Kree and took the battle to the Stars.
In a ferocious battle between Zerg vs. Protoss and Terran. Two things the Zerg didn’t count on were the Terran aiding the Protoss and with two skilled war tacticians they were able to win the war and take the war to Derak.
Cerebrate Kris'Gath's capital moon and attacked but Kris'Gath found a way to make an "Infinite fleet" on the moon and nearly annihilated the Protoss and Terran but out of thin air (the Shakna teleportation) a entire ancient Shakna fleet with fire power more powerful than the Yamato Gun came in and tilt the scales to the Shakna/Protoss and Terran and won the battle Admiral Conetzi, Schri both landed on the moon and confronted the cerebrate thankfully Schri had the Dark Templar energies and was able to slaughter the cerebrate. But suddenly the moon suddenly started to crack and explode luckily the Shakna/Protoss and Terran escaped.
Admiral Conetzi and Schri went back to the temple and Kree thanked Schri and the Admiral for he said it was "prophecy" that he had to wipe the mind of the Protoss to save the Shakna from the Zerg's fleet for if the Zerg annihilated the planet of Xion and the remaining Ancient Shakna temples the Zerg would absorb it all and become MORE powerful for nothing to stop them. Kree then once again thanked them and knocked them out and restored Schri and the Ghost Warrior's memory (Dark Templar) to remembering they were Protoss.
Thanking Kree Schri went back to Auir to be honored, Schri asked if the Admiral would go but he declined and went back to his home planet of Tarsonis. Schri wasn’t just honored but he held a funeral for the fallen warriors Tela, Kwi'Ta and all the Shakna/Protoss that died and made a "shrine" for Kree. The Protoss had a ceremony for Schri and gave him title "Savior of the Galaxy" that the ceremony was echoed through the Galaxy to all who live. *Credits come*
IT IS NOT FINISHED IM AM CURRENTLY WORKING ON IT!
THE DAY OF RECKONING.
THIS IS MY NEW CAMPAIGN HOPE YOU LIKE IT!
Currently working on level 4 of it called DoR4: Vision of Truth
ADDITION:
Oh, one more thing, I have a history of my custom race at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shakna
ADDITION:
I plan to have it done in a few days and I will have screen shots soon.
What are your thoughts of my story?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Snipe on 2006-01-31 at 23:57:44
QUOTE(God_fenix @ Jan 31 2006, 07:18 PM)
My campaign story and characters etc.
CHARACTERS:
Schri (Zeratul Model), Tela (Tassadar Model), Kwi'Ta (Fenix Model), Admiral Conetzi (Hyperion Model), Cerebrate Kris'Gath (Daggoth Model), Kree (Artanis Model)
TIME PLACE
100 Years before the infestation of Kerrigan
PLANETS
Planet Xion (Forest Planet) Moon Derak (Lava Moon)
PLACES:
TEMPLE OF KREE (Kree is the Ancient Warrior that turned the Protoss to believing them to be Shakna) Capital of Xion, Admiral's ship, Kris'Gath's capital, Schri's ship
RACES
ZERG
SHAKNA (then to Protoss)
TERRAN
STORY
100 Years before the infestation of Kerrigan... Protoss commander Tela and his Dark Templar Brethren named Schri were sent to a planet that was emitting powerful psionic energies. The planet Xion.
As the Protoss landed on the ship The Destructor near a temple that was emitting the psionic energies... the Protoss journeyed into the temple and found an ancient warrior of a different race (Shakna) he awakened and somehow used the psionic energy in the temple and knocked the Protoss out thus wiping there mind and suddenly making them believe they were Shakna.
Tela made a base near the ancient temple (a few clicks away) as they were working on there base Kwi'Ta claimed he saw some of Schri's Ghost Warriors (Shakna Dark Templar name) kill warriors or civilians. Tela ordered a meeting between them... inevitably the Ghost Warriors were banished from Tela. So Schri decided to build a base far from the temple.
They discovered they were betrayed. But Kwi'Ta sensed this also and sent the Zerg to attack Schri and his Ghost Warriors after battle after battle after battle, the Zerg suddenly stopped attacking and Schri decided to get some answers so he journeyed to the Temple of Kree. .
Kree awakened but found that he was the Shakna and Schri ordered some answered about Kwi'Ta and the Zerg... Kree told Schri about Kwi'Ta's connection with the Zerg. He said that Kwi'Ta was lied by the Zerg to survive was to join the Zerg and foolhardily he agreed... they didn’t infest him to the Swarm feeling they didn’t have to.
So Schri journey back to the capital wasn't hard for the Zerg suddenly must of retreated but when he arrived he found everyone nearly dead and the capital all burning in flames and saw the Zerg ravage the ENTIRE area. When Schri entered the capital he found Tela nearly dead.
Tela apologized his accusing Schri and Schri accepted before his dead but found Kwi'Ta staring the other direction watching the Zerg destroy all warriors there of the Shakna (or Protoss) Kwi'Ta annoyingly kept telling Schri told him to join the Swarm and they battled a lot. But suddenly as if Kree was with Schri gave him enough psionic abilities to defeat Kwi'Ta once and for all but before his death he realized he was wrong to ally with the Zerg... time to Schri suddenly froze. The Zerg then stopped and turned and chased Schri he got back in the capital ship "The Destructor" and then fled to another part of Xion but he found that the Zerg wanted to conquer the entire Galaxy not just the Shakna (Protoss) but then a Terran Admiral Conetzi called Xion.
Conetzi landed on the signal by Schri and told him about the "infinite" fleet of Zerg orbiting around Xion. Conetzi said that the Zerg came from a moon or so he knew called Derak a lavish planet. With the Terran aid they were able to gather enough power to wipe the Zerg at the capital of Xion and around the Temple of Kree and took the battle to the Stars.
In a ferocious battle between Zerg vs. Protoss and Terran. Two things the Zerg didn’t count on were the Terran aiding the Protoss and with two skilled war tacticians they were able to win the war and take the war to Derak.
Cerebrate Kris'Gath's capital moon and attacked but Kris'Gath found a way to make an "Infinite fleet" on the moon and nearly annihilated the Protoss and Terran but out of thin air (the Shakna teleportation) a entire ancient Shakna fleet with fire power more powerful than the Yamato Gun came in and tilt the scales to the Shakna/Protoss and Terran and won the battle Admiral Conetzi, Schri both landed on the moon and confronted the cerebrate thankfully Schri had the Dark Templar energies and was able to slaughter the cerebrate. But suddenly the moon suddenly started to crack and explode luckily the Shakna/Protoss and Terran escaped.
Admiral Conetzi and Schri went back to the temple and Kree thanked Schri and the Admiral for he said it was "prophecy" that he had to wipe the mind of the Protoss to save the Shakna from the Zerg's fleet for if the Zerg annihilated the planet of Xion and the remaining Ancient Shakna temples the Zerg would absorb it all and become MORE powerful for nothing to stop them. Kree then once again thanked them and knocked them out and restored Schri and the Ghost Warrior's memory (Dark Templar) to remembering they were Protoss.
Thanking Kree Schri went back to Auir to be honored, Schri asked if the Admiral would go but he declined and went back to his home planet of Tarsonis. Schri wasn’t just honored but he held a funeral for the fallen warriors Tela, Kwi'Ta and all the Shakna/Protoss that died and made a "shrine" for Kree. The Protoss had a ceremony for Schri and gave him title "Savior of the Galaxy" that the ceremony was echoed through the Galaxy to all who live. *Credits come*
IT IS NOT FINISHED IM AM CURRENTLY WORKING ON IT!
THE DAY OF RECKONING.
THIS IS MY NEW CAMPAIGN HOPE YOU LIKE IT!
Currently working on level 4 of it called DoR4: Vision of Truth
ADDITION:
Oh, one more thing, I have a history of my custom race at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shakna
ADDITION:
I plan to have it done in a few days and I will have screen shots soon.
What are your thoughts of my story?
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CHARACTERS:
Schri (Zeratul Model), Tela (Tassadar Model), Kwi'Ta (Fenix Model), Admiral Conetzi (Hyperion Model), Cerebrate Kris'Gath (Daggoth Model), Kree (Artanis Model)
TIME PLACE
100 Years before the infestation of Kerrigan
PLANETS
Planet Xion (Forest Planet) Moon Derak (Lava Moon)
PLACES:
TEMPLE OF KREE (Kree is the Ancient Warrior that turned the Protoss to believing them to be Shakna) Capital of Xion, Admiral's ship, Kris'Gath's capital, Schri's ship
RACES
ZERG
SHAKNA (then to Protoss)
TERRAN
STORY
100 Years before the infestation of Kerrigan... Protoss commander Tela and his Dark Templar Brethren named Schri were sent to a planet that was emitting powerful psionic energies. The planet Xion.
As the Protoss landed on the ship The Destructor near a temple that was emitting the psionic energies... the Protoss journeyed into the temple and found an ancient warrior of a different race (Shakna) he awakened and somehow used the psionic energy in the temple and knocked the Protoss out thus wiping there mind and suddenly making them believe they were Shakna.
Tela made a base near the ancient temple (a few clicks away) as they were working on there base Kwi'Ta claimed he saw some of Schri's Ghost Warriors (Shakna Dark Templar name) kill warriors or civilians. Tela ordered a meeting between them... inevitably the Ghost Warriors were banished from Tela. So Schri decided to build a base far from the temple.
They discovered they were betrayed. But Kwi'Ta sensed this also and sent the Zerg to attack Schri and his Ghost Warriors after battle after battle after battle, the Zerg suddenly stopped attacking and Schri decided to get some answers so he journeyed to the Temple of Kree. .
Kree awakened but found that he was the Shakna and Schri ordered some answered about Kwi'Ta and the Zerg... Kree told Schri about Kwi'Ta's connection with the Zerg. He said that Kwi'Ta was lied by the Zerg to survive was to join the Zerg and foolhardily he agreed... they didn’t infest him to the Swarm feeling they didn’t have to.
So Schri journey back to the capital wasn't hard for the Zerg suddenly must of retreated but when he arrived he found everyone nearly dead and the capital all burning in flames and saw the Zerg ravage the ENTIRE area. When Schri entered the capital he found Tela nearly dead.
Tela apologized his accusing Schri and Schri accepted before his dead but found Kwi'Ta staring the other direction watching the Zerg destroy all warriors there of the Shakna (or Protoss) Kwi'Ta annoyingly kept telling Schri told him to join the Swarm and they battled a lot. But suddenly as if Kree was with Schri gave him enough psionic abilities to defeat Kwi'Ta once and for all but before his death he realized he was wrong to ally with the Zerg... time to Schri suddenly froze. The Zerg then stopped and turned and chased Schri he got back in the capital ship "The Destructor" and then fled to another part of Xion but he found that the Zerg wanted to conquer the entire Galaxy not just the Shakna (Protoss) but then a Terran Admiral Conetzi called Xion.
Conetzi landed on the signal by Schri and told him about the "infinite" fleet of Zerg orbiting around Xion. Conetzi said that the Zerg came from a moon or so he knew called Derak a lavish planet. With the Terran aid they were able to gather enough power to wipe the Zerg at the capital of Xion and around the Temple of Kree and took the battle to the Stars.
In a ferocious battle between Zerg vs. Protoss and Terran. Two things the Zerg didn’t count on were the Terran aiding the Protoss and with two skilled war tacticians they were able to win the war and take the war to Derak.
Cerebrate Kris'Gath's capital moon and attacked but Kris'Gath found a way to make an "Infinite fleet" on the moon and nearly annihilated the Protoss and Terran but out of thin air (the Shakna teleportation) a entire ancient Shakna fleet with fire power more powerful than the Yamato Gun came in and tilt the scales to the Shakna/Protoss and Terran and won the battle Admiral Conetzi, Schri both landed on the moon and confronted the cerebrate thankfully Schri had the Dark Templar energies and was able to slaughter the cerebrate. But suddenly the moon suddenly started to crack and explode luckily the Shakna/Protoss and Terran escaped.
Admiral Conetzi and Schri went back to the temple and Kree thanked Schri and the Admiral for he said it was "prophecy" that he had to wipe the mind of the Protoss to save the Shakna from the Zerg's fleet for if the Zerg annihilated the planet of Xion and the remaining Ancient Shakna temples the Zerg would absorb it all and become MORE powerful for nothing to stop them. Kree then once again thanked them and knocked them out and restored Schri and the Ghost Warrior's memory (Dark Templar) to remembering they were Protoss.
Thanking Kree Schri went back to Auir to be honored, Schri asked if the Admiral would go but he declined and went back to his home planet of Tarsonis. Schri wasn’t just honored but he held a funeral for the fallen warriors Tela, Kwi'Ta and all the Shakna/Protoss that died and made a "shrine" for Kree. The Protoss had a ceremony for Schri and gave him title "Savior of the Galaxy" that the ceremony was echoed through the Galaxy to all who live. *Credits come*
IT IS NOT FINISHED IM AM CURRENTLY WORKING ON IT!
THE DAY OF RECKONING.
THIS IS MY NEW CAMPAIGN HOPE YOU LIKE IT!
Currently working on level 4 of it called DoR4: Vision of Truth
ADDITION:
Oh, one more thing, I have a history of my custom race at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shakna
ADDITION:
I plan to have it done in a few days and I will have screen shots soon.
What are your thoughts of my story?
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Hey man, I love the idea of making your own campaign. If you make it of a series, that would be awsome. If you try and get sounds into that map it would be awsome to. Well good luck dude ^.^.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by God_fenix on 2006-02-01 at 06:35:31
Im doing recordings for it and some other sounds in it currently on level 4 (DoR4: Vision of Truth)
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Lyon on 2006-02-01 at 16:53:11
Sounds Cool dude, i made a Campaign once called the Legacy of Xelana. Which i Never finished the Fourth part to..But what im sayin is i have some Experience w/Campaigns. so if you Need some Help pm-zorz 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Dark_Marine_123 on 2006-02-01 at 16:58:49
Sounds like someone is trying to make a campaign worthy of bnet ;D
Is it one player co-op or mutli player?
Is it one player co-op or mutli player?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by God_fenix on 2006-02-04 at 19:47:03
One player except on the last level you could have both a friend do this or solo because i will edit it so its all computer and just you and then you and another player for the last level where you could play terran or protoss.
ADDITION:
So what else you guys think???
Oh, Hi snipe (from RPGHaven)
ADDITION:
So what else you guys think???
Oh, Hi snipe (from RPGHaven)