Report, edit, etc...Posted by Tdnfthe1 on 2006-03-19 at 14:08:50
Hypnotized
Mezmerized
Can’t take your eyes off my smile.
Lookin deep into my eyes as you gaze upon these lips. All this temptation, desire, and lust…
How long can you deny – how long can you fight it?
The truth is you can’t, so let’s do this.
Let’s play a game I like to call Prelude to a Kiss….
You see when I step closer
You’ll move back
And when you stare at me…
I’ll stare right back
It’s like a tango… you lead I follow...
So tell me can you… resist the urge to tango….
Can you resist these lips, tell me can you still handle it?
Tell me, can you resist the temptation of a kiss…
Can you resist me as I move ever closer
Can you resist me as our heartbeats get louder
Can you resist me as my breath hits you lips
Can you resist me as I come so close to your lips – close enough to…
Share with you a kiss….
Can you still speak, can you still walk away
Can you still look me in the eye and not moisten your lips
Can you look me in the eyes and not become mesmerized
Can you move any closer and still be in control
Can you give me your hand and breathe without panting
Can you still hear
Can you still feel
Can you think about anything else than this moment here…
Cuz if you can’t…
Then finally that moment is here
Where you are in pure ecstasy and can’t feel a thing
And your body is so calm, a river could flow from it
And your lips…
Are finally ready…
To enjoy what’s about to come..
And the best part was...
Everything before this....
*(kiss here)* =D
"I know the poem is conceited somewhat, but sometimes that's just the way u gotta do it man. And i put the *(kiss here)* part just for posting it on SEN, since i wouldn't blame yall if u wanted to steal it
"
~Tdnfthe1
Mezmerized
Can’t take your eyes off my smile.
Lookin deep into my eyes as you gaze upon these lips. All this temptation, desire, and lust…
How long can you deny – how long can you fight it?
The truth is you can’t, so let’s do this.
Let’s play a game I like to call Prelude to a Kiss….
You see when I step closer
You’ll move back
And when you stare at me…
I’ll stare right back
It’s like a tango… you lead I follow...
So tell me can you… resist the urge to tango….
Can you resist these lips, tell me can you still handle it?
Tell me, can you resist the temptation of a kiss…
Can you resist me as I move ever closer
Can you resist me as our heartbeats get louder
Can you resist me as my breath hits you lips
Can you resist me as I come so close to your lips – close enough to…
Share with you a kiss….
Can you still speak, can you still walk away
Can you still look me in the eye and not moisten your lips
Can you look me in the eyes and not become mesmerized
Can you move any closer and still be in control
Can you give me your hand and breathe without panting
Can you still hear
Can you still feel
Can you think about anything else than this moment here…
Cuz if you can’t…
Then finally that moment is here
Where you are in pure ecstasy and can’t feel a thing
And your body is so calm, a river could flow from it
And your lips…
Are finally ready…
To enjoy what’s about to come..
And the best part was...
Everything before this....
*(kiss here)* =D
"I know the poem is conceited somewhat, but sometimes that's just the way u gotta do it man. And i put the *(kiss here)* part just for posting it on SEN, since i wouldn't blame yall if u wanted to steal it
"~Tdnfthe1
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Ice_Inferno_X3 on 2006-03-20 at 22:00:04
its so beautiful that I want to kiss you 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by chrono_seifer on 2006-03-20 at 22:08:36
its so not beutiful i want not to kiss you
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Tdnfthe1 on 2006-03-20 at 23:07:12
QUOTE(chrono_seifer @ Mar 20 2006, 09:08 PM)
its so not beutiful i want not to kiss you
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Was lookin for better feedback than that...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Hitl1r1 on 2006-03-21 at 00:15:09
I think it is fine. It is just kind of repetitive in the fact how it keeps saying "Can you.."
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-03-21 at 02:04:30
Hell, you might as well mod that rhythmically and turn it into a song 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mp)Blu on 2006-03-22 at 17:36:45
I thought it was a song. I think I've heard part of this poem in a song. No harm or insults intended. Oh yea, nice poem/song 