Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2006-06-19 at 20:32:57
My stupid internet disconnects
It leaves me with some bad effects
I yell
I curse
I slam my mouse
I kick
I Dance
I take off my blouse
Some say you can hear me from outside the house
Stupid internet disconnection
it must be like some dumb infection
There is my crapty poem
It leaves me with some bad effects
I yell
I curse
I slam my mouse
I kick
I Dance
I take off my blouse
Some say you can hear me from outside the house
Stupid internet disconnection
it must be like some dumb infection
There is my crapty poem
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-06-19 at 23:28:15
Rofl I loved it. There was rhythm, humor, and creativity. It's not crapty, it's fun and not depressing like many write for.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2006-06-20 at 10:35:06
Thanks 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Maith on 2006-06-20 at 20:14:29
lol, 
nice job on it do, I agree its not crappy
just curious but isnt most poetry complaining? or is it just me?
nice job on it do, I agree its not crappy just curious but isnt most poetry complaining? or is it just me?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Doodle77(MM) on 2006-06-20 at 20:16:13
you take off your blouse.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2006-06-20 at 20:17:34
QUOTE(Maith @ Jun 20 2006, 07:14 PM)
lol, nice job on it do, I agree its not crappy
just curious but isnt most poetry complaining? or is it just me?
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nice job on it do, I agree its not crappy just curious but isnt most poetry complaining? or is it just me?
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It rhymes so its close enough for poetry to me
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Yeah I do
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-06-20 at 23:20:50
There are many pieces of poetry describing wonderous places that, though do not exist in reality, do in the the blissful minds of an individual. And many others are expressions of happiness, peace, and love.
The reason there seems to be so many poems that are "complaining" is that, well, we all have a lot to complain about! And to think of most people about the age they're at here at SEN (I'd imagine it mostly be adolesence), there are probably very many people not very happy about life right about now...
Also, when some of us get in the mood to write poetry, we tend to try to reach out feelings (since that's often what we're writing about), and sad memories are much easier to pull up than the happy ones... I personally feel that sad memories come first because it then reminds you of the good ones later on. Lol, if you think about it, even good memories just before the sad moment (like memories before a break up) can end up being sad memories!
Anyhow... This is from me to everyone:
Remember the good moments and hold on to that. If you hold only onto the sad memories, you'll end up forgetting why you feel sad except that you do... therefore for no reason!
-fm47
The reason there seems to be so many poems that are "complaining" is that, well, we all have a lot to complain about! And to think of most people about the age they're at here at SEN (I'd imagine it mostly be adolesence), there are probably very many people not very happy about life right about now...
Also, when some of us get in the mood to write poetry, we tend to try to reach out feelings (since that's often what we're writing about), and sad memories are much easier to pull up than the happy ones... I personally feel that sad memories come first because it then reminds you of the good ones later on. Lol, if you think about it, even good memories just before the sad moment (like memories before a break up) can end up being sad memories!
Anyhow... This is from me to everyone:
Remember the good moments and hold on to that. If you hold only onto the sad memories, you'll end up forgetting why you feel sad except that you do... therefore for no reason!
-fm47
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2006-06-20 at 23:48:38
I got inspired to write this piece when my piece of crap computer disconnected from the internet
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2006-06-22 at 16:16:47
Crappy?! Are you kidding me?! You're such a low-life, you hate your own work!!--No I'm just kidding, that wasn't crappy, but inspiring Write more.
Write more.Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2006-06-22 at 21:45:04
thanks and will do that one was wrote in like 5 minutes I just need inspiration Report, edit, etc...Posted by RedNara on 2006-06-22 at 22:56:13
lol thats funny very nice you got talent insane
his is mine..
A bullet hole without a bullet
by Wayne
I hold the gun
The gun of truth
I open my mouth
To see the truth
The gun in my mouth
I see no future
The world is dark
Emotions are gone
Without any color
I press the trigger
With a hole in my head
I see the truth
The truth is beautiful
Because there is no bullet.
his is mine..
A bullet hole without a bullet
by Wayne
I hold the gun
The gun of truth
I open my mouth
To see the truth
The gun in my mouth
I see no future
The world is dark
Emotions are gone
Without any color
I press the trigger
With a hole in my head
I see the truth
The truth is beautiful
Because there is no bullet.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2006-06-22 at 23:17:26
Its good but a little to searious for my taste
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-06-23 at 01:44:02
Rednara, that poem was beautiful. It was breath-taking as it climaxed and definitly inspiring in the end. I loved it. Oh, I'm excited and feel like writing again (havn't for a while now) >_<
See? This is why i believe poems should deserve their own posts. Perhaps we could sign some weird petition and have each of us have something like our own little place of literature, maps, ect. Kinda like deviant art i guess.
And on the side note, is anyone else annoyed by templeguard? Maybe I'm just not giving a chance. Maybe it's just me.
I'm going to attempt to write after what rednara posted
We tend to forget;
We tend to lose
The Sight of Beauty--
The true form of Life.
Much is to be
Created right now
So that one day
We'll recollect
And remember then
Before again
You lose the Sight
And lose your Life
Aiya, maybe I should put some more time into it. And I do notice a little glitch from the first two and second two lines >_<
ADDITION**
Added the second verse thingy
See? This is why i believe poems should deserve their own posts. Perhaps we could sign some weird petition and have each of us have something like our own little place of literature, maps, ect. Kinda like deviant art i guess.
And on the side note, is anyone else annoyed by templeguard? Maybe I'm just not giving a chance. Maybe it's just me.
I'm going to attempt to write after what rednara posted
We tend to forget;
We tend to lose
The Sight of Beauty--
The true form of Life.
Much is to be
Created right now
So that one day
We'll recollect
And remember then
Before again
You lose the Sight
And lose your Life
Aiya, maybe I should put some more time into it. And I do notice a little glitch from the first two and second two lines >_<
ADDITION**
Added the second verse thingy
Report, edit, etc...Posted by RedNara on 2006-06-23 at 14:18:43
Wait poems cant get there own thread? They should be, thats a very nice poem fm47. Lol I didnt even know you were in SEN lol... That poem I wrote can be little serious becuase it was pretty much how I felt. I once tried to commit suicide lol... Well im fine now.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-06-24 at 00:56:21
Lol , have you seen me elsewhere?
Yeah, it seems like everyone goes through a suicidal age, especially during adolesence/high school. Some remain depressed and never get out of it entirely, some find enlightenment and become happier.
And oh, poems can have their own threads, just some people get irritated that a person would post 5 separate poems in the same 5 minutes instead of just 1.
And I am glad there were no bullets in that gun
-fm47
*sorry for going off topic
, have you seen me elsewhere?Yeah, it seems like everyone goes through a suicidal age, especially during adolesence/high school. Some remain depressed and never get out of it entirely, some find enlightenment and become happier.
And oh, poems can have their own threads, just some people get irritated that a person would post 5 separate poems in the same 5 minutes instead of just 1.
And I am glad there were no bullets in that gun
-fm47
*sorry for going off topic