Report, edit, etc...Posted by Screwed on 2006-06-27 at 07:34:38
[center]You Trapped Me
27-06-06
Your voice is a blade to my throat
Your embraces chain me up like barbed wire
While your charming eyes burn through me
You've held me captive long enough
I've got not what you want
Not what you desire
So let me go,
Liberate me from your addictive affection
Free me from your dangerous deception
Dismiss me from this insane pain;
This cage you gently adored me in
Release me
Let me live.
--Screwed[/center]
27-06-06
Your voice is a blade to my throat
Your embraces chain me up like barbed wire
While your charming eyes burn through me
You've held me captive long enough
I've got not what you want
Not what you desire
So let me go,
Liberate me from your addictive affection
Free me from your dangerous deception
Dismiss me from this insane pain;
This cage you gently adored me in
Release me
Let me live.
--Screwed[/center]
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2006-06-27 at 12:48:56
Err, wow. It's pretty good, but I don't see how it makes sense..
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Ninebreaker on 2006-06-27 at 18:22:45
Nice poem... I can tell what that could mean.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-06-28 at 17:33:04
This is what I've expected from ya 
I love the metaphors; they hold much emotions to the poem. And I definitly loved the rhythm.
Very good job. Keep it up
I love the metaphors; they hold much emotions to the poem. And I definitly loved the rhythm.
Very good job. Keep it up