Report, edit, etc...Posted by Screwed on 2006-06-29 at 04:57:59
[center]Tragic Fantasies
29/06/06
So the sky stained a crimson red,
I had painted it with my bloody hands.
The hands born in power,
Soaked in shame.
As I build my paradise on top of your shattered dreams,
I still can't understand the lust
Drawing me closer to fantasise about you.
About your love; fantasising your tragedies.
So I gaze
At the crimson red sky,
And begged for mercy.
For my sins are great.
--Screwed[/center]
29/06/06
So the sky stained a crimson red,
I had painted it with my bloody hands.
The hands born in power,
Soaked in shame.
As I build my paradise on top of your shattered dreams,
I still can't understand the lust
Drawing me closer to fantasise about you.
About your love; fantasising your tragedies.
So I gaze
At the crimson red sky,
And begged for mercy.
For my sins are great.
--Screwed[/center]
Report, edit, etc...Posted by RedNara on 2006-07-01 at 12:44:43
I think this good, good job 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-07-02 at 01:48:31
woot, 8/10. I like the vivid colors, the idea, and rhythm.
"As I build my paradise on top of your shattered dreams,
I still can't understand the lust
Drawing me closer to fantasise about you.
About your love; fantasising your tragedies."
If it's how I had interpreted, it sounds like a dark fantasy >_< ooh how naughty xD
"As I build my paradise on top of your shattered dreams,
I still can't understand the lust
Drawing me closer to fantasise about you.
About your love; fantasising your tragedies."
If it's how I had interpreted, it sounds like a dark fantasy >_< ooh how naughty xD