Report, edit, etc...Posted by Vibrator on 2006-07-09 at 22:04:08
Standing in the room with you, wondering; wondering what would happen to me if I were to walk out the door to this room. Walk out the room and fall, fall into the never ending abyss that is nothing. The nothingness that surrounds this room; the abyss that you and I are both apart of. You and I waiting for the abyss to swallow us up and the only thing that stands in its way is the room that you and I share.
If I walked out the door right now what would happen to you and I, would you stay in the room and weep and cry and tell yourself that one day I would return?
Would you sit and wait and tell yourself that you are better off? Do you think you would be better off having the room to yourself and sitting alone in the darkness waiting for nothingness, the abyss which will consume us all?
Would you follow me, would you jump out the door and call my name; looking in the nothingness for me. Crawling through the abyss for eternity searching for that which you have lost and finding only the abyss, the nothingness which surrounds you and follows you until the end of time.
The only place where choice still remains is in the room; the room with me and you and the nothingness waiting for us on the other side of that door. The choice that awaits seems larger than the room, larger than the abyss, nothingness itself. If you would make up your mind perhaps you and I could leave the room. Leave the room together and explore the nothingness, live in the abyss forever, you and I.
It's the first thing I've done in a couple years, I didn't edit it much either. Oh well, tell me what you think.
If I walked out the door right now what would happen to you and I, would you stay in the room and weep and cry and tell yourself that one day I would return?
Would you sit and wait and tell yourself that you are better off? Do you think you would be better off having the room to yourself and sitting alone in the darkness waiting for nothingness, the abyss which will consume us all?
Would you follow me, would you jump out the door and call my name; looking in the nothingness for me. Crawling through the abyss for eternity searching for that which you have lost and finding only the abyss, the nothingness which surrounds you and follows you until the end of time.
The only place where choice still remains is in the room; the room with me and you and the nothingness waiting for us on the other side of that door. The choice that awaits seems larger than the room, larger than the abyss, nothingness itself. If you would make up your mind perhaps you and I could leave the room. Leave the room together and explore the nothingness, live in the abyss forever, you and I.
It's the first thing I've done in a couple years, I didn't edit it much either. Oh well, tell me what you think.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2006-07-10 at 13:38:46
Cool. It's probably similar to how I would write a story...really, but I don't actually know. It's just a guess.
I liked this, though I didn't know what it's about. You and me, in a room? With a door leading to nothingness? And if I would search for you if you get lost? Well, if we were close friends, of course I would, get lost myself, but why would I throw my life away just to do something that's impossible?
Exactly.
The topic was kind of confusing.
I liked this, though I didn't know what it's about. You and me, in a room? With a door leading to nothingness? And if I would search for you if you get lost? Well, if we were close friends, of course I would, get lost myself, but why would I throw my life away just to do something that's impossible?
Exactly.
The topic was kind of confusing.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Vibrator on 2006-07-10 at 19:03:30
A lot of my stuff does tend to be confusing for some people, you gotta really think about it 