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Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-07-25 at 17:37:54
You've lived your simple life
Where flowers always bloomed
Trees were never naked
In that place you've always lived

And holidays, they always came
Relatives would be there
Grace would be said just before
Everyone stuffed their mouths

Then you took one step
And set it on the world
An alternate lifestyle
You would never live

In fact-
You would rather die.


Just felt like writing something, peace.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2006-07-28 at 13:43:31
Solid poem I liked it and there really isnt much I can suggest fixing because your style is really clean
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