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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Pyro-Fire on 2006-09-02 at 13:10:05
user posted image


rate.

first time on terraining, hope its good biggrin.gif
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Jordan on 2006-09-02 at 13:30:54
It's nice, but maybe add some more terrain to make it look a bit wavy if you understand what I'm trying to say.

8/10 biggrin.gif
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Zeratul_101 on 2006-09-02 at 13:35:49
3/10

theres nothing really wrong with it, but theres nothing really special about it either.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Lord_Agamemnon(MM) on 2006-09-02 at 13:48:03
What's with all those sprites? I don't see any reason for them to be there. I also don't see anything particularly noteworthy about the river design; also, it looks too artificial (it's too straight.) 2.5/10
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Killer_Kow(MM) on 2006-09-02 at 14:27:46
Try to take in game screenies, its easier to see.

1) Rivers aren't straight.

2) Don't use sprites where they are unneccessary.

3) On the south-western side it looks like you have height problems with the cliff, although I can't really see it all that well.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by PuRe( on 2006-09-02 at 14:57:55
Pretty much same as what Kow said. 3/10. Try not using so many sprites
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Doodle77(MM) on 2006-09-02 at 15:15:50
I see blockyness where there shouldnt be any, but it still looks nice.
3.5/10
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Pyro_Maniak14 on 2006-09-02 at 17:11:20
QUOTE(Lord_Agamemnon @ Sep 2 2006, 12:47 PM)
What's with all those sprites?  I don't see any reason for them to be there.  I also don't see anything particularly noteworthy about the river design; also, it looks too artificial (it's too straight.)  2.5/10
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What he said.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2006-09-02 at 17:18:21
The river is completely straight; since when were they? The cliffs were almost identical, and the sprites were in plenty. Too many, many three trees, and two bushes, but not 6!

I don't see any blockiness.

It doesn't look real.

6/10
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Rantent on 2006-09-02 at 17:27:52
Its too straight to be a river.
Rivers on flat ground wind around..
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Kupo on 2006-09-02 at 17:48:46
sorry, i dontsee whats so good about it.

1/10
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Lyon on 2006-09-02 at 19:26:18
That's a river? 0_o 1/10
Report, edit, etc...Posted by PHI on 2006-09-02 at 22:08:55
it was a nice try but ingame screenshots and try to blend instead of covering with sprites
Report, edit, etc...Posted by KABOOM on 2006-09-03 at 01:16:20
well for one thing sprites can be used for theme but in this case since your new i dont think they were... 2/10
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Pyro-Fire on 2006-09-03 at 01:26:09
Ok so it looks too straight. apart from that, what other problems can u see?

Edit:

im thinking that the bottom-left platform can be used as a sort of "water sanctuary" thing for an RPG.
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