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Report, edit, etc...Posted by mayonnaise on 2006-09-06 at 18:58:11
I only have one picture for now. After browsing around at some different pics and maps, I have seen quite a bit of jungle terrain. I'm going to be posting more and more pictures, so give me ideas on getting better.

This is a very simple ramp blend. I have not sprited/doodad yet. I know the rest looks pretty dull, but I am working on just the ramp blend, and on this pic, rate and review just the ramp.

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Report, edit, etc...Posted by PuRe( on 2006-09-06 at 19:21:35
Could be done better 2/10
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Pyro_Maniak14 on 2006-09-06 at 19:22:14
Blocky on the left side of the ramp. Nothing new. 0/10
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Kevjak.oO on 2006-09-06 at 20:05:43
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Blocky on the left side of the ramp. Nothing new. 0/10


you people and your ridicoulously cocky nonsensical ratings

0/10 effectivly means that there can be nothing submitted that would be worse than this.
there is no lower rating than 0/10

that is bullcrap.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Jello-Jigglers on 2006-09-06 at 22:56:27
Is nonsensical a word? I don't think it is... Wait, dictionary.com confirms it is a word...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Kupo on 2006-09-06 at 23:28:16
not bad, iv seen worse.

4/10

some parts could be easily fixed.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Syphon on 2006-09-06 at 23:57:15
QUOTE(Oo.Kevjak.oO @ Sep 6 2006, 07:05 PM)
you people and your ridicoulously cocky nonsensical ratings

0/10 effectivly means that there can be nothing submitted that would be worse than this.
there is no lower rating than 0/10

that is bullcrap.
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I rate on a scale of -∞ - 10. 0/10 is ridiculously high.

I give this a -10. tongue.gif
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Kupo on 2006-09-07 at 01:27:25
QUOTE(Syphon(MM) @ Sep 6 2006, 07:56 PM)
I rate on a scale of -∞ - 10. 0/10 is ridiculously high.

I give this a -10. tongue.gif
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dont listen to him, your first custom ramp sucked, who cares.

took me like 2 months to get somewhat descent at terrain.

and then a man, a man with fire helped me.

woodenfire.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Kevjak.oO on 2006-09-07 at 03:58:07
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Is nonsensical a word? I don't think it is... Wait, dictionary.com confirms it is a word...
has jello jigglers contributed anything? I dont think he has.... WAIT he definately has NOT so dont post. I agree with kupo 4/10 sounds about right. keep at it sir.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Jello-Jigglers on 2006-09-07 at 08:42:37
QUOTE(Oo.Kevjak.oO @ Sep 7 2006, 12:57 AM)
has jello jigglers contributed anything? I dont think he has.... WAIT he definately has NOT so dont post. I agree with kupo 4/10 sounds about right. keep at it sir.
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I sense sarcasm?

On topic:
Blocky ending on the right side(-2).
Blocky ending on the left side(-2).
Height Issues on both left and right side of ramp(-2).
Unneccessary bridge tile(-2).
Astetics Score: 2/10


Difficulty 2/10.
Originality 2/10.
Quality 3/10.
Overall Score: 1/6

Try and improve in all of the overall areas. Choose something harder. Make something different. Work harder on it. smile.gif

Report, edit, etc...Posted by WoodenFire on 2006-09-07 at 17:52:53
No way! thats the map I have posted in the terrain database! I did the lower right area... smile.gif

How is it going?

That ramp is like a .25/10 btw... Lol
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Pyro_Maniak14 on 2006-09-07 at 19:04:20
QUOTE(Oo.Kevjak.oO @ Sep 6 2006, 07:05 PM)
you people and your ridicoulously cocky nonsensical ratings

0/10 effectivly means that there can be nothing submitted that would be worse than this.
there is no lower rating than 0/10

that is bullcrap.
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Uh... its a ramp. It's been done thousands of times.
0/10 Originality
0/10 Professionalism
And besides, its just pieces of the bridge terrain blending into the dirt... like anyone hasn't done that before...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Syphon on 2006-09-07 at 20:33:57
QUOTE(Kupo @ Sep 7 2006, 12:27 AM)
dont listen to him, your first custom ramp sucked, who cares.

took me like 2 months to get somewhat descent at terrain.

and then a man, a man with fire helped me.

woodenfire.
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Show me my first custom ramp. smile.gif
Report, edit, etc...Posted by mayonnaise on 2006-09-07 at 22:07:37
I was hoping for something more...contstructive, but I guess not. Obviously it isn't gosu and obviously it is 1/10. I want to know how I can make it better. I updated the first post. I fixed up the first ramp some and added a second picture. Please leave something contructive this time...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Jello-Jigglers on 2006-09-07 at 22:19:00
Well, obviosly you have woodens maps. Check out that little island he did in that one. This is a little something I did using similar pieces from that and other maps:

(make sure you click to enlarge them. You might have to click and then press back)
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and
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Those are two pretty good examples of "lefts and "rights" of ramps. Then you just choose the lengths you want and bam. There is also that little back ramp that isn't too bad.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mightybass101 on 2006-09-08 at 17:21:47
5/10 i dont get these people everyone starts out bad and they get better.They should help you, not make you wanna quit.

1st one-blend is goods but there is a square block of grass that is just chillin' so fix that

2nd one-Continue the grass out farther from the cliff
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