Staredit Network

Current Version: V 1.2

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Looks like blues got an advantage early on due to the ramp placement. Sieged tanks can get men after they cross the bridge and while they're coming around to the ramp You might want to fix that.

You might also want to add a nat to those bases.

There are some they are just next to the minerals

ADDITION:
Red can sortof do the same thing blue can

I also came to the conclusion the only races that have a chance on this map are Zerg and terran

Yay its my critizing time.

Blue with his space makes it easier for toss because of building space. Red wont have a chance agaisnt blues base and most people are just gona end up with protecting there base on reds side. Just make it easier for most people and make them the same.



For the last freaken time stop posting those words. Adding a "first" to the name doesnt change anything about your map.

[sub]Posting a full size picture would be nice, I wrote a tut on how to do it here.

I'll be nice and do it for you this time.


As far as the map goes, not too bad for your first try. I would try reading this guide to learn some of the basics. Also look at some pro melee maps if you need help with ideas, BWMN is home to alot of pro melee map makers and hundreds of great maps.[/sub]

I didnt want people to go easy on the rating being my first map...



Thanks I dled the SCM to JPG convertor nad im gonna look at what you suggested

Thanks valug.

So, one good thing to learn when starting off, is balancing terrain. The error you made was making red work harder to get up blues ramp than blue has to work to get up red's.
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The whole time red is on blue's side, they can be attacked from the highground, while blue can go straight up red's ramp.

If you edit this map, try to fix that. The rest will come by playing melee, looking at maps, etc.

Ok im working on fixing what you said as well as balancing terrain masses for teams and everything else

Lets just say there is alot of reconstructioning going on

Alright, lets hope it turns out OK. Good luck.

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New Version Up

[sub]To fix that, open and save as from staredit then use that for the pic. Any other editors can corrupt the pictures. You don't have to release the staredit versons, just use them for pictures.[/sub]

Alright thanks

Too much empty space now...make the middle bigger
or add a design in the space part to the left.

I thought of something for the 2 side parts but havent decided if i am going to add

Someone correct me if I'm wrong, but the mineral count for each base is kind of small isn't it? I think each main has 6 and the 2 "nats" have 7. I might be wrong, just seems like it would be a race to expo.

I find it ironic that you named the map "enough for two" when in truth the only thing there is enough of is Vespane gas. I do not like having two vespane geysers at the mains, nor do I like the lack of expansions. Two is not enough, in my opinion.