Report, edit, etc...Posted by FlareonFurry on 2006-11-25 at 18:12:03
I'll admit that I was trying to make something for the Cityscape contest, but I'm pretty sure it's not good enough to enter. What do you guys think of it?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by NerdyTerdy on 2006-11-25 at 18:15:55
That hover world thing is VERY blocky. Try to work on that some more.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by FlareonFurry on 2006-11-25 at 18:18:20
I was having issues finding terrain pieces that worked for that particular side of the building... I didn't wanna whore the blue-green windows like everyone else...
I'll see what I can do.
I'll see what I can do.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Pyro_Maniak14 on 2006-11-26 at 01:19:41
Not bad for your first try, actually. There is a little bit of blockiness in the structure but thats not EXTREMELY noticable, not to me anyways.
4/10
4/10
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mp)Excalibur on 2006-11-26 at 01:20:39
Its a good start. Build up on it, bring in more ideas, make the piece bigger. I wish you luck with the contest.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Lord-Omega on 2006-11-30 at 11:00:44
QUOTE(Pyro_Maniak14 @ Nov 26 2006, 01:19 AM)
Not bad for your first try, actually. There is a little bit of blockiness in the structure but thats not EXTREMELY noticable, not to me anyways.
4/10
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4/10
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very true, i didnt even notice the blocky untill "Other" said it, compared to my first peice its very good, id say 7/10
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Xx.Doom.xX on 2006-11-30 at 11:04:42
6/10 The blocky part.
Would be good for a Store.
Would be good for a Store.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2006-12-04 at 21:40:31
5/10 not bad I kinda like it the end looks a little like a dock... try a multi level building next time
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Chronophobia on 2006-12-05 at 07:25:51
Actually on my first view I thought you messed up quite alot on the structure piece until I noticed that it was a little higher than regular structures, that made a pretty nice effect but there are some noticeable blockiness, I'd say you should try more in making that building taller and maybe add some highlighted areas which might attract some attention to it.
Nice work as a first try!
Nice work as a first try!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Kookster on 2006-12-05 at 15:11:21
Wow I must be blind cause I cant see the blockyness. Ide give it a 6/10 since its not super fancy but I like the water edge alot!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by spinesheath on 2006-12-05 at 15:20:45
At the bottom right of that greenish "hover world" thingy in the wall of the building. At first glance it is not really visible since that tile has about the same colour, but it indeed is visible.
There also are some slight mistakes on the roof of the building, probably because of laziness.
There also are some slight mistakes on the roof of the building, probably because of laziness.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2006-12-05 at 22:41:43
QUOTE(Kookster @ Dec 5 2006, 03:11 PM)
Wow I must be blind cause I cant see t!he blockyness
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I guess so because it is blocky
