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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mp)Excalibur on 2007-02-03 at 03:59:16
I recently looked at Corbo's terran building modding tutorial. It seemed easy enough so i gave it a shot, and im doing ok. Ive made these:

Working Machine Shop:
Edit: Image isnt showing on SEN because its a .swf or flash movie. Click linky.
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f126/MCR...Machineshop.swf

Comstat:
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Terrans in one:
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New Supply Depot:
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Another new one, dont know what for:
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Rawrz Protoss!
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Comments? Requests? Secks?
Also: All my GRPs are open for anyone to use. Contact me for any image you see here or at my photobucket and ill be happy to send you the GRP.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Kookster on 2007-02-03 at 05:21:42
I like the refinery based building, the only thing ide suggest is try to make it all look more like one peice not so plates or added on together. One shape, kinda.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by CheatEnabled on 2007-02-03 at 07:38:19
The ones on the first picture look a bit unrealistic, escpecially the one with Starport parts (The biggest one). It's just too big, and the fans on top don't look very well there. Try removing them or change them, and see if it becomes better.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by SubFocus on 2007-02-03 at 08:40:22
The latest one is the only one I can say I like. The other ones don't quite fit in. Especially the one made of Starports
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Lord_Agamemnon(MM) on 2007-02-03 at 10:09:42
I agree. They look very pieced together and unrealistic, especially the ones in the first picture. The Refinery one, although it's better, still looks like it was made from the diferent pieces. Try blending it a bit and it'll be pretty good.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mp)Excalibur on 2007-02-03 at 11:20:54
Thanks guys, i said i didnt like the starport, but i think the machine shop looks fine. The sci facil just needs some tweaking. Adding new supply depot now.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Voyager7456(MM) on 2007-02-03 at 11:29:06
Hmm, I really like the latest two.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mp)Excalibur on 2007-02-03 at 11:30:17
QUOTE(Voyager7456(MM) @ Feb 3 2007, 11:29 AM)
Hmm, I really like the latest two.
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Praise from the gods! Continue work!
Worship the holy symbol: voyagersmiley.gif
Report, edit, etc...Posted by nirvanajung on 2007-02-03 at 12:16:06
When I look at the picture as overall
You made a nice try even though there are awkwardness a bit

u looks getting better since when u show us the latter pictures
and considering u get going in the mid of begining to composite graphic

they are looks quite gloriously wink.gif



Report, edit, etc...Posted by Doodle77(MM) on 2007-02-03 at 15:50:21
There are several little black lines in the first one.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mp)Excalibur on 2007-02-03 at 16:58:10
I took out the first three because they were horrible. Im going to try to get one more done before the dance tonight.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Kookster on 2007-02-03 at 17:33:17
ok those are starting to look cool, but you need to blend them more together, as in make it look less like you copy pasted a bunch of parts together and more like they are one part. But it is looking good Im liking your style.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mp)Excalibur on 2007-02-04 at 15:05:26
New one added, im getting better i think. What i did was assemble all terran buildings into one BMP so that i didnt need a million windows of paint open. I might upload it to the DLDB as i find its helpful and it took me a lil while to assemble it.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Killer_Kow(MM) on 2007-02-04 at 15:09:24
You're getting better, compared to your first ones.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Doodle77(MM) on 2007-02-04 at 16:07:09
Try to upload things as .png's so that you dont have some compression artifacts, anyway, the black lines i'm talking about are these:
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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mp)Excalibur on 2007-02-04 at 16:48:21
QUOTE(Doodle77(MM) @ Feb 4 2007, 04:07 PM)
Try to upload things as .png's so that you dont have some compression artifacts, anyway, the black lines i'm talking about are these:
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I know im not yet re-doing the old ones, but i will be soon. Thanks though Doodle.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by SubFocus on 2007-02-05 at 11:41:30
Cool stuff. I like how they all look so armored.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mp)Excalibur on 2007-02-05 at 14:34:17
QUOTE(SubFocus @ Feb 5 2007, 11:41 AM)
Cool stuff. I like how they all look so armored.
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What i didnt like about the terran buildings was how they were so innocent, they didnt look war ready. No defensive turrets, massive cannon batterys, it just wasnt there. It looked like we landed on mars tomorrow and welded sheet metal squares into random crap.

Thanks SubFocus, you do great GRP work yourself. Ill be updating this very soon.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by CheatEnabled on 2007-02-05 at 14:39:00
I like the 3rd one of the new ones. That's good.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mp)Excalibur on 2007-02-05 at 14:57:48
Im currently assembling some Protoss buildings. Zerg too. Its all a matter of assembling a BMP database. The problem is i have to write each grp into a bmp then move those BMPs into one. Its time consuming and school is beat. Ive been sacrificing alot of sleep to keep working late on new buildings.

Edit: First protoss building, dont hurt me i know its not great.

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Edit: New terran

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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Killer_Kow(MM) on 2007-02-05 at 16:34:53
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Circled part looks really bad imo :/
Report, edit, etc...Posted by nirvanajung on 2007-02-05 at 17:41:50
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First protoss building, dont hurt me i know its not great.

no, u looks getting better ever-advancing

infact, that technique is nothing the most important thing is a sence to
describe vividly
i think u have a nice sense for that

if u get compositing picture as well then try to make animations to give the live
for ur made one
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mp)Excalibur on 2007-02-07 at 02:45:07
QUOTE(Killer_Kow(MM) @ Feb 5 2007, 04:34 PM)
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Circled part looks really bad imo :/
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I know im having a problem with the roof of that one, but i really love the rest of it.

ADDITION:
Updates:
Two more protoss added. Existing one smoothed/edited. Cyber core middle overlays the middle tower on it in game, so dont worry about how it looks in the pic.
Here:
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I did alot of recoloring on the assim, took me awhile.
Re-doing some of the terran buildings now. Fixing roof on the latest, fixing lines on the earlier.
Animated Machine Shop. Cant get it into a moving format because im using paint. =/
Report, edit, etc...Posted by SubFocus on 2007-02-07 at 03:51:49
Wow. Those look better than my Protoss biuldings biggrin.gif

Perhaps make something that's not symmetrical? You might feel this is un-important though, since some people think symmetry is the key to all
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mp)Excalibur on 2007-02-07 at 06:25:19
QUOTE(SubFocus @ Feb 7 2007, 03:51 AM)
Wow. Those look better than my Protoss biuldingsĀ  biggrin.gif

Perhaps make something that's not symmetrical? You might feel this is un-important though, since some people think symmetry is the key to all

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Actually Sub, i was worried about what people would say if it wasnt symmetrical. Ive wanted to give such a go, and ill see if i can finish one before school.

And Thanks. smile.gif

ADDITION:
Updates:
First building totally re-done. I did alot of blending and im happy with it.
Im also experimenting with changing some of the purple to yellow and green to make the buildings have lights like parts of the science facility.
Also Added: Unsymmetricle small thingy. Dont know what for yet.
Also: The lighting im experimenting with looks better in game then it does on the pics.
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