Report, edit, etc...Posted by King_Mulu on 2004-08-23 at 17:00:41
im thinking of starting a story of a group of heros thats land is being taking over by the people who thay thought where there friendly cave dwellers the twist of the story is that these ppl have never had a reason to expand there land thay just kept digging deeper and deeper down but it seem that these heros must find out and fix the probelm
any good?
any good?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Chill on 2004-08-23 at 17:04:26
That Reminds me of a Sci Fi novel i just finished reading. Sounds cool 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Nozomu on 2004-08-23 at 18:37:14
Too vague and clichéd to call a good story. I hate to say it, but it's bad. And this is the wrong forum for this question.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by NerdyTerdy on 2004-08-23 at 18:43:29
Be more detailed please...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by greenreaper on 2004-08-23 at 18:51:59
You need to include more descriptions....and a little bit more of a storyline.....
Report, edit, etc...Posted by King_Mulu on 2004-08-24 at 16:37:09
hmmmmm more detail like what? Report, edit, etc...Posted by P-OnMeToWin on 2004-08-24 at 17:03:36
Why is their land being taken over, for one? Second, use proper grammar.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by exo6yte on 2004-08-24 at 17:06:01
It's better than Final Fantasy, but that isn't saying much.