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I was wondering what you guys thought, this is for a map im working on...

It's just bridge terrain. It fits with the costal cliff if thats what your asking.

EDIT: Upon closer inspection, the edges are a little rough.

I know. I was just wondering if anyone had some constructive criticism about it. Any suggestions to make it better.

I looks pretty nice. I just don't like the tiles in the middle of the "dock" they don't blend in with each other. Every tile is independand so the lines in one square might face left up while the one beside right up. Try, if you can to blen the tiles in more together.

The very edge of the dock (left side thats on land) looks real rough.

Yeah, I couldn't find a way to blend that out.

Better? You can't really get the right edge of the dock to match up.

I got kinda lazy when i was doing the bottem part where the docks meet the land.

Yeah, that looks a little better. I'm going to work at it and see if I can find an alternative to that edge.

I guess you already know this but make sure at grateing part on the large section of the dock lines up. Yours is random blocks (or the same one) and it shows that you didn't consider matching those tiles.

It was a rough mockup, I was more concerned with the left and right corners that didn't look very good.

Meh, nothing really new, looks alright though

You could try covering it up with a sprite.

I already thought if that, and I'm considering using 1 or 2 of them.

[center]It looks very sexy, but yea.. decorate it with some sprites to make it better.[/center]

I like it, it would make a good dock. Just consider making it longer and extend horizontally out more and havemore 'teeth' for more boats to be at anchor at once. Twighlight is so the best terrain!!

I was thinking of completely re-vamping the idea. Make a strait dock with mini extentions extending. I'll show you what I mean later.